Talk:1942 Atlantic hurricane season/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hurricanehink mobile (talk · contribs) 01:26, 26 June 2017 (UTC)


 * Ref for 1934 bit?
 * I'm gonna go with something else. How about it was one of seven seasons to feature multiple hurricane landfalls in Texas?--12george1 (talk) 02:32, 26 June 2017 (UTC)


 * A total of 11 tropical depressions from 1943 are listed in the Atlantic hurricane database, with two additional tropical depressions.  - this is confusing
 * I meant to say tropical storms--12george1 (talk) 02:32, 26 June 2017 (UTC)


 * In November, the Belize hurricane caused extensive impact in several coastal communities of Belize. - redundant saying Belize hurricane and Belize. It wasn't known as that anyway until 4 decades later :P
 * Better?--12george1 (talk) 02:32, 26 June 2017 (UTC)


 * TS 1
 * reintensify further just feels wrong
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 02:32, 26 June 2017 (UTC)
 * Text and infobox don't match regarding top winds
 * Infobox is correct--12george1 (talk) 02:32, 26 June 2017 (UTC)
 * A lack of available weather ships in the region due to World War II, no ships documented the tropical cyclone. - grammar? Missing word?
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 02:32, 26 June 2017 (UTC)
 * In Texas, the tropical cyclone caused light rainfall, damaging local cotton crops, and strong gusts in the Rio Grande Valley. - poor symmetry of words
 * Better?--12george1 (talk) 02:32, 26 June 2017 (UTC)


 * H2
 * The hurricane initially weakened quickly after moving inland. - no need for initially and quickly
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 02:32, 26 June 2017 (UTC)


 * H3 - mention where it dissipated (New Mexico IIRC). Also, fix the conversion for the rainfall. You have inch (m), but it is (mm) elsewhere.
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 02:32, 26 June 2017 (UTC)


 * H4
 * The third storm of the season 
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 02:32, 26 June 2017 (UTC)
 * Shortly thereafter, while the storm passed about 90 mi (140 km) east of Bermuda – its closest approach to the island – the cyclone peaked with maximum sustained winds of 110 mph (175 km/h).[4] The hurricane produced sustained winds of 64 mph (103 km/h) on the island. - find a better way to split this info between the two sentences
 * Better?--12george1 (talk) 02:32, 26 June 2017 (UTC)


 * TS 6 - Analysis by the Hurricane Research Division - no other section mentions this, so it feels out of place.
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 02:32, 26 June 2017 (UTC)


 * TS 7 - Several hours later, the system began to move northwestward.  - did you mean NE?
 * No. That northeastward part is the ET stage. But actually the "northwestward" movement was more like north-northwestward.--12george1 (talk) 02:32, 26 June 2017 (UTC)


 * Other systems - The depression moved rapidly northwestward toward Louisiana, but transitioned into an extratropical cyclone by the following day.  - I don't understand the but here.
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 02:32, 26 June 2017 (UTC)

A decent article overall, shouldn't be hard to improve. Hurricanehink mobile (talk) 01:26, 26 June 2017 (UTC)