Talk:1948 Cleveland Browns season/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Khazar2 (talk · contribs) 02:13, 2 October 2013 (UTC)

I'll be glad to take this review; sorry you've had to wait so long for this one. Comments to follow in the next 1-3 days. Thanks in advance for your work on this! -- Khazar2 (talk) 02:13, 2 October 2013 (UTC)

Initial comments
I've read the first few sections and glanced at the rest and this seems in very good shape so far--well written, grammatically solid, and thoroughly sourced. Spotchecks of sources confirm accuracy and no copyvio. Will continue tomorrow. Only two suggestions so far:
 * "The trade is considered one of the most astute in Browns history" -- it would be better to attribute this opinion in-text to Piascik, I think, instead of the vaguer passive voice. -- Khazar2 (talk) 02:30, 2 October 2013 (UTC)
 * "has not been surpassed since" -- probably should say "as of 2007, had not been surpassed" or some such per WP:REALTIME -- Khazar2 (talk) 12:00, 2 October 2013 (UTC)

Checklist
Thanks for the review, and your changes look good to me. --Batard0 (talk) 18:14, 2 October 2013 (UTC)