Talk:1954 Atlantic hurricane season/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: 12george1 (talk · contribs) 03:13, 6 October 2011 (UTC)


 * Several times in the article, you say that Carol and Edna struck New England as major hurricanes; although both storms were major hurricanes, they did not make landfall at that intensity.
 * Actually, this HURDAT file as of 2011 says they did. --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 03:27, 6 October 2011 (UTC)
 * "During the season, there were eight named storms,[4] as well as an unnamed hurricane and a tropical depression." - What about the unnamed tropical storm?
 * That's mentioned. It formed after the season ended. --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 03:27, 6 October 2011 (UTC)
 * "It bceame the costliest natural disaster in the state's history," - typo
 * Daw. --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 03:27, 6 October 2011 (UTC)
 * "On Long Island, the storm surge flooded the Montauk Highway with 4 ft (1.2 m) about a mile across." - You should change that to "4 ft (1.2 m) of water"
 * Yea! --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 03:27, 6 October 2011 (UTC)
 * "In response, U.S. Air Force planes flew food, medicine, rafts, and water purification tablets to the most affected regions" - That sentence is missing the period.
 * Well, that... er... hmm... --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 03:27, 6 October 2011 (UTC)
 * "160 km/h (100 mph)" and "1,100 km (680 mi)" should be switched back to the American unit first and metric unit second.
 * OH NO!!!!!!!!!!!!! --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 03:27, 6 October 2011 (UTC)
 * "On October 2, a troical depression moved westward" - typo
 * No love for troicals? --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 03:27, 6 October 2011 (UTC)
 * References #3 and 4 are duplicates.
 * Wow, mefail. --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 03:27, 6 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Reference #15 is missing the date.
 * Well, how about that. --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 03:27, 6 October 2011 (UTC)
 * NOAA shouldn't be abbreviated in reference #23.
 * Oops. --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 03:27, 6 October 2011 (UTC)
 * There is a minor incidence of first and last name inconsistency on the references, #29, #41, and #42 have the last name first, while the others are vice-versa.
 * Fixed. --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 03:27, 6 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Associated Press should not be abbreviated in reference #43.
 * GOt iT! --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 03:27, 6 October 2011 (UTC)
 * References 44-49 don't have the correct title.
 * Oops. --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 03:27, 6 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Possibly more later--12george1 (talk) 03:13, 6 October 2011 (UTC)
 * I hope I got all of the above! --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 03:27, 6 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Never mind, I got nothing else against this article (or troicals). Therefore, I am going to pass this article--12george1 (talk) 16:34, 6 October 2011 (UTC)