Talk:1957 Philadelphia municipal election/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 04:00, 19 February 2017 (UTC)

Will do. YE Pacific Hurricane  04:00, 19 February 2017 (UTC)
 * Pipe "city controller" with comptroller in the first sentence. YE Pacific Hurricane  03:46, 27 February 2017 (UTC)
 * Done. --Coemgenus (talk) 18:45, 2 March 2017 (UTC)
 * "Under the 1951 City Charter, " what's a "City Charter? YE Pacific Hurricane  03:46, 27 February 2017 (UTC)
 * Linked it to Municipal charter.--Coemgenus (talk) 18:45, 2 March 2017 (UTC)
 * "Voters in the 1st district also voted for city council in 1957 in a special election " where is the 1st district? YE Pacific Hurricane  03:46, 27 February 2017 (UTC)
 * I added a clause describing the location (South Philadelphia) and a map. --Coemgenus (talk) 18:45, 2 March 2017 (UTC)
 * newspapers.com is overlinked in the references. YE Pacific Hurricane  03:46, 27 February 2017 (UTC)
 * Fixed. --Coemgenus (talk) 18:45, 2 March 2017 (UTC)
 * . Ping. YE Pacific Hurricane  17:13, 2 March 2017 (UTC)
 * thanks for the review! I think I've resolved these issues. --Coemgenus (talk) 18:45, 2 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Ping. --Coemgenus (talk) 19:32, 7 March 2017 (UTC)