Talk:1964 Brinks Hotel bombing/GA1

GA Review
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Hi! I have elected to review this article against the Good article criteria, and should have my initial comments posted up within the next few minutes. Cheers, Abraham, B.S. (talk) 10:08, 17 February 2009 (UTC)


 * I have now completed reviewing this article against the criteria and am placing it on hold pending some concerns outlined below. This is quite a good article, and only requires a few minor improvements before GA. Cheers, Abraham, B.S. (talk) 10:23, 17 February 2009 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * "the “major” told the hotel clerk..." - this is the first mention of a "major", and is slightly confusing. I presume you are referring to one of the VC agents? If so, this should be clarified.
 * "and would go to a nearby café for replenishment" - I'm not sure replenishment is the right word in this context. Perhaps refreshment, or some such?
 * "Some of out local squabbles will probably..." - is out correct? Or is it just a typo or a sic in the quote? It just doesn't seem right.
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

I used sustenance, as he could have had a proper meal. The rest are fixed and added an infobox as well.  YellowMonkey  ( click here to vote for world cycling's #1 model! ) 01:56, 18 February 2009 (UTC)
 * Yep, all looks good now. A nice addition to the store of Good articles. Congratulations and well done! Cheers, Abraham, B.S. (talk) 02:57, 18 February 2009 (UTC)