Talk:1965 Atlantic hurricane season/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 22:41, 20 February 2013 (UTC)


 * "tropical storm, developed during the month of June in the Eastern Pacific Ocean, while located south of Guatemala." remove "Eastern" YE  Pacific   Hurricane  22:41, 20 February 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 05:11, 26 February 2013 (UTC)


 * I'd cut back on storms a bit in the lead.YE  Pacific   Hurricane  22:41, 20 February 2013 (UTC)
 * I don't know about that, it was a pretty boring season, except for Betsy. Would should I do, put more emphasis into Betsy?--12george1 (talk) 19:41, 23 February 2013 (UTC)
 * Because the 65 was a crudy season, is why it IMO should be shorter.
 * Well, we have a similar format for the 1991 Atlantic hurricane season, which is an FA, shall I mention.--12george1 (talk) 00:08, 27 February 2013 (UTC)
 * Any the number of hurricane/TD's/major hurricanes to the lead? YE  Pacific   Hurricane  22:41, 20 February 2013 (UTC)
 * Not sure what you are saying. Are you asking me to state the number of tropical depressions, hurricanes, and major hurricane in the lead?--12george1 (talk) 19:41, 23 February 2013 (UTC)
 * Yea. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  02:37, 24 February 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 00:08, 27 February 2013 (UTC)
 * Move the timeline graph to the SS. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  22:41, 20 February 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 00:14, 27 February 2013 (UTC)
 * "though damage, if any is unknown." why mention it if it is unknown?
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 00:14, 27 February 2013 (UTC)
 * Why was One not named? YE  Pacific   Hurricane  22:41, 20 February 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed; it was operationally considered a TD for its entire duration.--12george1 (talk) 05:11, 26 February 2013 (UTC)


 * "During that day and August 25, several ships reported tropical storm and hurricane force winds." Can you expand I that please? Were thet useful? What was the peak wind?
 * Wasn't too important. I don't know why I even added that little tidbit.--12george1 (talk) 00:14, 27 February 2013 (UTC)
 * I'd add Besty's peak winds and maybe pressure to it's summary. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  22:41, 20 February 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 00:14, 27 February 2013 (UTC)
 * "Thus, Elena likely reached hurricane status at 0600 UTC that day.[5] " Change "Thus" to "Therefore" to create more varied sentence strcure IMO. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  22:41, 20 February 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 00:14, 27 February 2013 (UTC)
 * Ref #14 Remove staff writer. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  22:41, 20 February 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 00:08, 27 February 2013 (UTC)
 * Ref #15 Remove staff writer. Thanks. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  22:41, 20 February 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 00:08, 27 February 2013 (UTC)
 * Do any of the newspapers have articles? YE  Pacific   Hurricane  22:41, 20 February 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 00:08, 27 February 2013 (UTC)
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