Talk:1966 NASA T-38 crash/GA1

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Reviewer: Resident Mario (talk · contribs) 04:17, 13 July 2012 (UTC)

Nice, short article. Res Mar 04:17, 13 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Lead
 * The first sentence should be reconfigured to the more standard "The X was when Y happened".
 * Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 09:36, 13 July 2012 (UTC)
 * The lead should mention the weather conditions at the time of the accident.
 * Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 09:36, 13 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Infobox
 * I don't think "Crashed into building" is an accident type in the way Engine Failure on Take-Off or Controlled flight into terrain would be.
 * Went with Controlled flight into terrain. Hawkeye7 (talk) 09:36, 13 July 2012 (UTC)
 * The exact time of the crash is not mentioned past the infobox, and should be cited there.
 * Added to article. Hawkeye7 (talk) 09:36, 13 July 2012 (UTC)
 * The crash
 * By the roof, do you mean the building roof, or the plane roof?
 * Re-worded to make this unambiguous. Hawkeye7 (talk) 09:36, 13 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Investigation and aftermath
 * What do you mean by "predictably"?
 * Delete word. Hawkeye7 (talk) 09:36, 13 July 2012 (UTC)
 * All issues addressed. Hawkeye7 (talk) 09:36, 13 July 2012 (UTC)