Talk:1967 Gillette Cup final/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 14:28, 25 December 2017 (UTC)

Since you helped review some of my articles, I will be kind enough to review one of yours. Comments will come soon. MWright96 (talk) 14:28, 25 December 2017 (UTC)
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Infobox

 * Consider adding an Image of Lord's as you have done in your other GA's of this final

Lede

 * Saw this from the 1979 Gillete Cup Final GA: consider changing "which had been the first domestic tournament to pit first-class cricket sides against each other in a knock-out competition" to the first English domestic knock-out competition between first-class sides

Background

 * "If Kent won, it would their first competition win since the 1928 County Championship" - change win to victory to avoid reptition

Route to the final

 * Be consistent in how you present scores, as in the first score for Kent, you use 239 for eight, while the rest bar one are written as "251 for 9" for example.
 * Perhaps inclement weather would be a better substitute for bad weather

Summary

 * Remove the wikilinks to Colin Cowdrey, John Shepherd, Alan Dixon, Alan Brown, Derek Underwood, Roy Virgin, Graham Burgess and Mervyn Kitchen as they are already link in the previous section
 * "who scored 21 and 17 respectively before both were run out" - a comma is needed at the end of this piece of text
 * "Alley, identified as a key player for Somerset before the match," - identified by whom?

Aftermath

 * Explain who Bill Edrich was