Talk:1971 San Fernando earthquake/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 15:16, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week.  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 15:16, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
 * , Thanks for that. Take your time. Dawnseeker2000  19:30, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Couldn't find any issues with the infobox.
 * I don't think the word "extraordinary" is neutral to use, so try replacing it. ✅ I've replaced extraordinary with unprecedented. Maybe that will sound more in line with neutral wording.
 * Other than that, the lead looks good.

Tectonic setting

 * Remove the comma after "Channel Islands offshore". ✅

Earthquake

 * Add a serial comma after "east–west strike". ✅
 * I don't think "landsliding" is an actual word, so reword. ✅
 * Add a comma after "the Tujunga segment". ✅
 * "frequently-encountered" "frequently encountered" ✅

Damage

 * "heart attack" "heart attacks" ✅
 * Is "proper ties" the correct words being used, or is it a typo? ✅ Yes, it's correct. I've linked Tie (engineering) to assist the reader.
 * "The large" "A large" ✅
 * Remove the comma after "closest school to Pacoima dam". ✅

Aftermath

 * Add a comma after "Long Beach earthquake". ✅
 * "debate began" "a debate began" ✅