Talk:1971 World Snooker Championship/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: BennyOnTheLoose (talk · contribs) 21:56, 29 August 2020 (UTC)

Note: I've previously added to this article. According to xtools my contribution to it is 1.1%. I don't consider this a "significant contribution" due to the low proportion of the article this represents, and because my edits were not about anything fundamental. Happy to discuss, or be challenged on, any of my review comments. I'll make what I regard as uncontroversial minor changes as I go through. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 21:56, 29 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your work on the article, - my comments so far are below, I don't expect to raise anything else. I haven't found any major issues. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 19:47, 30 August 2020 (UTC)


 * I've covered all of the below,, thanks for the review. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:32, 31 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks for all your work on the article and the responses to my review comments. Following the changes, I'm happy to pass this for GA. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 18:31, 31 August 2020 (UTC)

Review Comments

Infobox Copyvio and plagiarism check Overview
 * I think the relevant organisation was the the B&SCC for this tournament. (Let me know if you need a source, unless you have one that says it was the WPBSA)
 * Nope, someone else added that and I didn't notice it
 * I don't think format should be "ranking event" as this pre-dates the rankings.
 * Changed Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:32, 31 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Use flagathlete?
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:32, 31 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Earwig's Copyvio Detector has no matches above 4.8%. I looked through those with more than 1%, and have no concerns.
 * Might be worth spelling out somewhere that this is regarded in sources as the 1971 event even though it took place in 1970, other wise the first line of the lead could look a bit odd to a reader who could reasonably expect the 1971 Championship to be held in 1971.
 * You would think. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:32, 31 August 2020 (UTC)
 * "the sport was popular in the British Isles". I don't have data to hand, but I think it still is! Consider something like "..originally popular mainly in...", if sources support it. (I note that the current wording has been passed in FA reviews, so this is very much an optional change).
 * Consider bringing the dating of "the modern era" out of the footnote and into the article, as the usage won't be familiar to all readers.
 * It is a bit of an aside though (which is the need for a note) - I don't see a natural way to comment this. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:32, 31 August 2020 (UTC)
 * OK, the note is there at the end of the sentence, not unreasonable to expect that a curious reader would look there. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 18:31, 31 August 2020 (UTC)
 * The basis of the incomplete round-robin seems, in Clive Everton's telling, to be shrouded in mystery. Instead of "until four players remained, where it reverted to a single elimination format" maybe something like "from which four players qualified to the single elimination format rounds"?
 * Agreed. 4 just probably worked out in terms of the schedule. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:32, 31 August 2020 (UTC)

Format Round-robin rounds Knockout rounds Round-robin stage Table Knockout stage Image Lead References
 * "This was the first time the championship was held outside the United Kingdom" - consider an expansion or a footnote to cover off the two 1965 challenge matches in South Africa.
 * Added in prose. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:12, 31 August 2020 (UTC)
 * "... in which each competitor played a three-day, 37-frame match against four of the other eight competitors." seems to leave open the possibility that matches were one player against four. How about "... in which each competitor played four three-day, 37-frame matches." or "... in which the matches were of 37 frames, played across three days, and each competitor played four of the other eight competitors."
 * I prefer the second Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:12, 31 August 2020 (UTC)
 * "The number of frames needed to win a match increased at the semi-finals stage, which were played as the best-of-49, and the final as the best-of-73 frames." doesn't read quite right to me.
 * Reworded. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:12, 31 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Title could probably be just "Round-robin"
 * done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:21, 31 August 2020 (UTC)
 * "Reardon beat Eddie Charlton" to "Reardon beat Charlton"
 * done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:21, 31 August 2020 (UTC)
 * "Owen scored his first century .." add something like "of the tournament"
 * done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:21, 31 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Three consecutive sentences start with "Simpson" - reword.
 * I've reworded the second of the three which should do the job. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:21, 31 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Looks fine.
 * What's the source, or is it a calculation from the results?
 * Added source. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:29, 31 August 2020 (UTC)
 * On my desktop, Norman Squire's "Player" column wraps. Consider amending the width of this column.
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:29, 31 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Use flagathlete for semi-finals.
 * No need - only needs to be done with the first usage of every flag. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:32, 31 August 2020 (UTC)
 * OK. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 18:31, 31 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Free to use. Checked a sample of locations, looks fine.
 * Ideal. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:32, 31 August 2020 (UTC)
 * See comment above about the name of the tournament v the date it took place, and the 1965 challenge matches in South Africa.
 * done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:21, 31 August 2020 (UTC)
 * "with a round-robin round with four qualifiers" - how about "with a round-robin stage producing four qualifiers"?
 * done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:21, 31 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Reword to avoid duplication of the word "break" in "the highest break of the tournament with a break of 129 in the final session"
 * done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:21, 31 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Depth and breadth of coverage is appropriate. No significant issues found with references, which are from reliable sources and support the text, subject to comments above. There are a couple of places where references be re-ordered for tidiness, e.g. [17][15], [20][18][19], [49][18][19]