Talk:1977 (Ash album)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wetrorave (talk · contribs) 14:52, 15 June 2021 (UTC)

My first GA review, so I'm not sure if I am doing this correctly but I'll try

Lead and infobox

 * "May 1996, through Infectious Records with whom" > "May 1996 by Infectious Records, with whom"
 * "They released the mini-album Trailer" - who released it, the label or the band?
 * Use either "Trailer (1994)" or "Trailer in 1994", not both at the same time
 * "some of whom commented on its catchy nature" > "who praised the album's 'catchy' nature" for neutrality

Background

 * Good

Production

 * Retitle to "Recording and production"
 * Unless the placement is necessary for the reader to understand something in other sections, this should be below "Composition and lyrics"
 * You may prefer to use Cite tweet instead for the tweets by Ash, though this is more of a style preference of mine rather than a GA criterion

Composition and lyrics

 * Change the first "co-written" to "co-wrote"
 * "The band purposefully wanted the song to be a "proper punch in the face", which they achieved." > "According to the band, the song was meant to be a "proper punch in the face"."
 * "and evokes the Boo Radleys," > "reminiscent of the Boo Radleys,"
 * "was written about" > "was about"

Release

 * Good

Critical reception

 * According to the Album ratings template, "do not include language like 'Very favorable' or '(mixed)' in the template, as this would be original research."
 * Several of the sentences here are far too large; try splitting them up
 * "Erlewine said by" > "Erlewine said that, by"
 * "on Trailer, however," > "on Trailer. However," or "on Trailer; however,"

Commercial performance and accolades

 * The last paragraph should be in Critical reception
 * You may prefer to present accolades in a way that mixes table and prose form; see Everywhere at the End of Time for an example

Track listing

 * Good

Personnel

 * Good

Charts and certifications

 * Good

Conclusion

 * until issues are fixed; you may add an External links section or images of the band Ash. Wetrorave (talk) 14:52, 15 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Made the changes. Yeepsi (talk) 15:20, 15 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Alright, ✅ for this one. Wetrorave (talk) 15:33, 15 June 2021 (UTC)