Talk:1978 Atlantic hurricane season/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 01:55, 1 July 2014 (UTC)

I have to review this. YE Pacific Hurricane  01:55, 1 July 2014 (UTC)
 * "The 1978 Atlantic hurricane season was the last Atlantic hurricane season with an all-female naming list." "with all" to "to use". YE Pacific Hurricane  01:55, 1 July 2014 (UTC)
 * Err, that wouldn't be grammatically correct. Better?--12george1 (talk) 02:40, 1 July 2014 (UTC)


 * " In June and July, two tropical depressions formed, but neither caused many effects, if any, on land." axe this sentence. It is horrible. YE Pacific Hurricane  01:55, 1 July 2014 (UTC)
 * ". Hurricane Ella because the northernmost Category 4 hurricane" where? In Aranda's hair? YE Pacific Hurricane  01:55, 1 July 2014 (UTC)
 * Actually, there's another error you missed :P Fixed.--12george1 (talk) 02:40, 1 July 2014 (UTC)


 * " Hurricane Greta brought strong winds, high tides, and flooding to Central America, particularly Belize and Honduras. Greta resulted in about $25 million in damage and at least five fatalities. Additionally, it reached the East Pacific and was renamed Olivia. " Is the bit about reaching the EPAC really that important? YE Pacific Hurricane  01:55, 1 July 2014 (UTC)
 * Yes, but not important enough to be mentioned in the lede :P --12george1 (talk) 02:40, 1 July 2014 (UTC)


 * "In July, there were two system" "system" to "systems". YE Pacific Hurricane  01:55, 1 July 2014 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 02:40, 1 July 2014 (UTC)


 * "with another unnumbered tropical depression and Tropical Storm Amelia. " change "with another" to "including". YE Pacific Hurricane  01:55, 1 July 2014 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 02:40, 1 July 2014 (UTC)


 * " Although officially, subtropical storms are not included in the ACE value," they are now I thought. YE Pacific Hurricane  01:55, 1 July 2014 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 02:40, 1 July 2014 (UTC)


 * " The storm moved at an unusually high forward speed for a cyclone in the Atlantic Ocean in August. Later on August 8, Cora intensified into a hurricane.[28]" combine these two sentences. YE <sup style="color:#666660;">Pacific <sup style="color:#666660;">Hurricane  01:55, 1 July 2014 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 02:40, 1 July 2014 (UTC)


 * "The hurricane was also upgraded into a hurricane based solely on satellite photography, the second time this occurred. " mention that when you discuss MH. YE <sup style="color:#666660;">Pacific <sup style="color:#666660;">Hurricane  01:55, 1 July 2014 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 02:40, 1 July 2014 (UTC)


 * "A significant drop in tourism occurred. " why? Cause you hired someone to go "NOOO DON'T GO TO NC OR YOU ARE A COMMUNIST" during the weekended? :P YE <sup style="color:#666660;">Pacific <sup style="color:#666660;">Hurricane  01:55, 1 July 2014 (UTC)
 * Yep. I was alive in 1978 :P --12george1 (talk) 02:40, 1 July 2014 (UTC)


 * "A high pressure area transitioned into a trough, " how is such an event possible? YE <sup style="color:#666660;">Pacific <sup style="color:#666660;">Hurricane  01:55, 1 July 2014 (UTC)
 * It's possible according to Flossie's preliminary report--12george1 (talk) 02:40, 1 July 2014 (UTC)


 * " By the afternoon of October 4, the system had acquired the characteristics of a tropical storm and was named Irma; the gale-force winds extended 150 mi (240 km) from the center of circulation.[61][62]" cut out with a knife the "the" before "gale-force". YE <sup style="color:#666660;">Pacific <sup style="color:#666660;">Hurricane  01:55, 1 July 2014 (UTC)
 * Crap, my laptop screen isn't working now! >:( :P Fixed.--12george1 (talk) 02:40, 1 July 2014 (UTC)


 * Refs 9-12: Spell out first and last names. YE <sup style="color:#666660;">Pacific <sup style="color:#666660;">Hurricane  01:55, 1 July 2014 (UTC)
 * I don't know what those initials mean.--12george1 (talk) 02:40, 1 July 2014 (UTC)