Talk:1978 FA Charity Shield/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 13:52, 29 March 2020 (UTC)

Will review this article as well. MWright96 (talk) 13:52, 29 March 2020 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * The reference in the lead is not necessarily required per MOS:LEADCITE since there are no quotes in it
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 15:47, 29 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "Watched by 68,000," - Watched by a crowd of
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 15:47, 29 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "Nottingham Forest took the lead in the tenth minute through Martin O'Neill and doubled their lead with a Peter Withe goal." - repetition of the word "lead"
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 15:47, 29 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "Forest's lead was further extended through econd" - typo; should be spelt as second
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 15:47, 29 March 2020 (UTC)

Background and pre-match

 * "Forest had won the league in the previous season, seven points clear of Liverpool and having been undefeated at home at the City Ground throughout the season." - repetition of the word "season" in the same sentence
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 15:47, 29 March 2020 (UTC)
 * Please write out Forest and Ipswich in their full names since this will be the first time both clubs are mentioned in the prose
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 15:47, 29 March 2020 (UTC)

Summary

 * Wikilink volley, corner, cross and free kick to their respective articles
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 15:47, 29 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "Shilton made another "stunning" save to deny" - according to whom?
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 15:47, 29 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "Good work from Robertson" - Not so sure what is being implied here. A little rewording would help explain exactly what Robertson did
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 16:03, 29 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "Ipswich's George Burley waited too long fora pass" - for a
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 16:03, 29 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "to take the ball and strike past" - strike it
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 16:03, 29 March 2020 (UTC)

Post-race
These were the issues that I found. Will put on hold for the time being. MWright96 (talk) 14:25, 29 March 2020 (UTC)
 * Perhaps you could briefly state who Bobby Moore was
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 16:04, 29 March 2020 (UTC)
 * all done, thanks. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 16:04, 29 March 2020 (UTC)
 * Alrighty then. Will now promote to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 17:13, 29 March 2020 (UTC)