Talk:1982 Atlantic hurricane season/GA1

GA Review
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 * Lede
 * Can you make the first sentence more original, something stating what was notable about the season?✅Thegreatdr (talk) 23:45, 7 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Storms
 * I'm not convinced with the 115 fatalities from Beryl. I found an official document (which I sadly lost when my computer crashed) from the United Nations that stated only three fatalities occurred due to Beryl. Also, the reference being used to source the 115 fatalities does not mention any deaths. Source of three fatalities✅ Thegreatdr (talk) 20:51, 8 June 2009 (UTC)
 * The last sentence in the hurricane debby section needs a reference✅ Thegreatdr (talk) 19:12, 8 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Names
 * There's redundancy in this section, retirement is stated twice and the section is not referenced.✅ Thegreatdr (talk) 19:26, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

Overall the writing is up to GA standards but there are factual and referencing issues. As such, I'm putting the article on hold for the time being. Cyclonebiskit (talk) 17:35, 7 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Alright, looks good I'm going to pass the article. Nice job DR. Cyclonebiskit (talk) 22:11, 8 June 2009 (UTC)