Talk:1985 Atlantic hurricane season/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 01:55, 14 August 2013 (UTC)

Before I put some of my GAN wannabee's up, Ill review this piece of wikipedia work.
 * "It was an average season, with 14 tropical cyclones 11 named storms developing." cut the "14 tropical cyclon" tibit out. YE Pacific  Hurricane 01:55, 14 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 02:28, 14 August 2013 (UTC)


 * "Although several storms caused minimal effects, there were also several tropical cyclones left extensive impact." to "Although several storms caused minimal effects, several tropical cyclones also left extensive impact." YE Pacific  Hurricane 01:55, 14 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 02:28, 14 August 2013 (UTC)


 * Mention the famous Elena forecasting faults in the lead, that's how it is remembered. YE Pacific  Hurricane 01:55, 14 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 02:28, 14 August 2013 (UTC)


 * " In addition, the precursor to Tropical Storm Isabel caused a deadly flood in Puerto Rico, with 180 fatalities reported." you just said it did little land impact earlier. YE Pacific  Hurricane 01:55, 14 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 02:28, 14 August 2013 (UTC)


 * "In the second week of July, an area of convection merged with a cut-off low pressure area, which developed on July 8." link "cut-off low pressure area" to trough (meteorology). YE Pacific  Hurricane 01:55, 14 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Done--12george1 (talk) 02:28, 14 August 2013 (UTC)


 * "Four people died in the Washington, D.C. and Maryland from " throw "the" out the article and into TAM's mouth :P YE Pacific  Hurricane 01:55, 14 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 02:28, 14 August 2013 (UTC)


 * " it transitioned into a low pressure area offshore Georgia on August 9. Around that time, the system developed into a subtropical depression. " it seems that it was a low pressure area before that so change it to "it developed into a subtropical depression on August 9." YE Pacific  Hurricane 01:55, 14 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Not sure. Is a trough with a circulation and a low pressure area the same thing?--12george1 (talk) 02:28, 14 August 2013 (UTC)


 * "and 40 feet (12 m) of sand was washed away along portions of the Florida Panhandle.[46]" abbreviate feet. Do so without cutting off my foot :P YE Pacific  Hurricane 01:55, 14 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 02:28, 14 August 2013 (UTC)


 * "150 miles (240 km) " same here. YE Pacific  Hurricane 01:55, 14 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 02:28, 14 August 2013 (UTC)


 * "405 miles (650 km)" ditto YE Pacific  Hurricane 01:55, 14 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 02:28, 14 August 2013 (UTC)


 * Cut back on Gloria stuff in the section, it's not that important. YE Pacific  Hurricane 01:55, 14 August 2013 (UTC)
 * But it was a retired storm and considered the "storm of the century" by some at the time.--12george1 (talk) 02:28, 14 August 2013 (UTC)


 * "415 miles (670 km)" see above. YE Pacific  Hurricane 01:55, 14 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 02:28, 14 August 2013 (UTC)


 * "415 miles (670 km)" and above. YE Pacific  Hurricane 01:55, 14 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 02:28, 14 August 2013 (UTC)


 * "[59][57]" keep refs in order here YE Pacific  Hurricane 01:55, 14 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 02:28, 14 August 2013 (UTC)


 * "3.38 inches (86 mm)" see above YE Pacific  Hurricane
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 02:28, 14 August 2013 (UTC)


 * "17.78 inches (452 mm)" unit consistency. YE Pacific  Hurricane 01:55, 14 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 02:28, 14 August 2013 (UTC)


 * SE chart:"New England (Rhode Island" Do we need to send you do a parthesis doctor? :P YE Pacific  Hurricane
 * Nah, just a drug test would work :P --12george1 (talk) 02:28, 14 August 2013 (UTC)


 * "Southern Hemisphere tropical cyclone seasons: 1984–85, 1985–86" the SHEM has been split up. the AUS, SPAC, and SWIO have their won articles. YE Pacific  Hurricane 01:55, 14 August 2013 (UTC)
 * I wasn't aware that an article could be "won" :P --12george1 (talk) 02:28, 14 August 2013 (UTC)