Talk:1987 Football League Fourth Division play-off final/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 06:37, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Am reviewing for the July 2021 GAN Backlog Drive MWright96 (talk) 06:37, 1 July 2021 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
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Lead

 * "Aldershot had finished in sixth place in the Fourth Division while Wolverhampton Wanderers finished fourth." - repetition of "finished"
 * "They were joined in the play-offs by fifth-placed Colchester United and Bolton Wanderers, who had finished in 21st place in the division above." - repetition of "place(d)"
 * "Aldershot defeated Bolton Wanderers in their semi-final, consigning the latter to relegation, while Wolverhampton Wanderers defeated Colchester United in the other semi-final." - repetition of "defeated"
 * The term relegation can be wikilinked to the appropriate article in the first paragraph

Route to the final

 * "For the first two years of the play-offs, the club which had finished immediately above the relegation places in the Third Division competed with three clubs from the Fourth Division immediately below the promotion positions for a place in the second tier of English football for the following season." - repetition of each of "club(s)" and "place(s)"
 * "the game into extra time" - text is a little too close to The Times source

Second leg (summary)

 * "Ten officers and a police horse were injured in the riot while forty-two people," - try to avoid starting a sentence with a number figure

Post-match

 * "The Wolverhampton Wanderers manager Graham Turner" - avoid MOS:SEAOFBLUE here