Talk:1988–89 South-West Indian Ocean cyclone season/GA1

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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 05:55, 21 January 2015 (UTC)

Ill get around to reviewing this tomorrow. Would have done it tonight, but we had a 3OT game, so gotta postpone it to tomorrow. I got you covered though, Hink! YE Pacific Hurricane  05:55, 21 January 2015 (UTC)
 * "The 1988–89 South-West Indian Ocean cyclone season was an active season that featured several storms moving near or over the Mascarene Islands or Madagascar." define "active". YE Pacific Hurricane  01:06, 22 January 2015 (UTC)
 * I do later. It had more storms than average. ♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 04:17, 23 January 2015 (UTC)


 * "Storms were monitored by the Météo-France office (MFR) on Réunion island in an official capacity, as well as the American Joint Typhoon Warning Center on an unofficial base." why is MFR abbireated when it is abbreviated again later on (see next comment). Also, if you remove the below abbreviation, do the add the "(JTWC)" after "Center" and remove the below abbreviation t be consistent. YE Pacific Hurricane
 * I added an abbreviation for JTWC. ♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 04:17, 23 January 2015 (UTC)


 * "During the season, the Météo-France office (MFR) on Réunion island issued warnings in tropical cyclones within the basin. Using satellite imagery from National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration, " Second abbreviation of MFR here, see back to previous comment. YE Pacific  Hurricane
 * "– a storm attaining maximum sustained winds of at least 120 km/h (75 mph) – " you just said that in the lead. YE Pacific Hurricane  01:06, 22 January 2015 (UTC)
 * Doesn't hurt to remind. ♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 04:17, 23 January 2015 (UTC)


 * " Before entering the south-west Indian Ocean, the BoM estimated that the system reached 10 minute winds of 105 km/h (65 mph).[9] " What is BOM? (Yea, I know, but most ATL lovers who are coming to explore other articles may or may not know). YE Pacific Hurricane  01:06, 22 January 2015 (UTC)
 * Added. ♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 04:17, 23 January 2015 (UTC)


 * "The origins of Calasanjy were from the Intertropical Convergence Zone in the Mozambique Channel off the northwest coast of Madagascar in early January.[12]" delink ITCZ. YE Pacific Hurricane  01:06, 22 January 2015 (UTC)
 * Done. ♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 04:17, 23 January 2015 (UTC)


 * "of 2,702 m3/s (95,420 ft3/s," close parenthesis before the comma. YE Pacific Hurricane
 * Your signature is longer than your comment :P ♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 04:17, 23 January 2015 (UTC)


 * "Around that time, Firinga passed 50 km (30 mi) west of Mauritius, producing 190 km/h (120 mph) wind gusts.[20] " Delink Mauritius because you linked it at least once before. YE <sup style="color:#666660;">Pacific <sup style="color:#666660;">Hurricane  01:06, 22 January 2015 (UTC)
 * "Firinga and Krisy decreased the output of the sugar crop by 20,000 tons,[36] " what kind of tons? Imperail? Metric? YE <sup style="color:#666660;">Pacific <sup style="color:#666660;">Hurricane  01:06, 22 January 2015 (UTC)
 * K. ♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 04:17, 23 January 2015 (UTC)


 * In what planet do we put the see also below the references? Pluto? Jupiter This isn't 2010! :P YE <sup style="color:#666660;">Pacific <sup style="color:#666660;">Hurricane  01:06, 22 January 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for reviewing! ♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 04:17, 23 January 2015 (UTC)
 * Hurricanehink mobile (talk) 20:10, 26 January 2015 (UTC)