Talk:1989 Football League Fourth Division play-off final/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 22:07, 14 June 2021 (UTC)

Shall review MWright96 (talk) 22:07, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
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 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
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 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
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Lead

 * Wikilink cross to the relevant article for non-Football readers
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 15:13, 28 June 2021 (UTC)

Route to the final

 * "Leyton Orient finished the regular 1988–89 season in sixth place in the Football League Fourth Division – the fourth tier of the English football league system – one place and four points ahead of Wrexham." - repetition of "place"
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 15:13, 28 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Darren Wright put the home side into the lead after two minutes when he scored from a free kick" - whose's free kick?
 * Sources don't say. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 15:13, 28 June 2021 (UTC)

Background

 * "Both sides had won their away game in the matches between the sides during the regular season:" - repetition of "sides"
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 15:13, 28 June 2021 (UTC)

Matches

 * Just a note, is the one paragraph for both legs that really all the information that is available?
 * Early days play-offs at this level of English football received scant coverage. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 15:13, 28 June 2021 (UTC)

Second leg (summary)

 * "and headed in a cross." - from who?
 * The source mentions three players but doesn't make it clear which of them played the final ball in. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 15:13, 28 June 2021 (UTC)

Post-match

 * "Frank Clark, the winning manager said" - shouldn't there be another comma after the word "manager"?
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 15:13, 28 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Wiklink Heathrow Airport
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 15:13, 28 June 2021 (UTC)