Talk:1989 Football League Third Division play-off final/GA1

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 07:06, 26 May 2021 (UTC)

Comments That's enough for a first pass, on hold. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 17:51, 26 May 2021 (UTC)
 * "the 1989–90 season" put "season" inside the pipe. Check all instances of this.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 14:47, 27 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Link "replay".
 * Done.--EchetusXe 14:47, 27 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Actually, I don't think the Bristol Rovers game belongs in the lead, background only.
 * What Bristol Rovers game?--EchetusXe 14:47, 27 May 2021 (UTC)
 * I meant City... The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 16:58, 27 May 2021 (UTC)
 * "talisman" POV, some people might think that's a position on the pitch....!
 * Done.--EchetusXe 14:47, 27 May 2021 (UTC)
 * "Earle was the hero once again" again, tone issues, stick to the facts.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 14:47, 27 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Lead should note that the final was thus won 2-1 on agg.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 14:47, 27 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Link header.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 14:47, 27 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Link Vale and Rovers again in the Route to the final sec.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 14:47, 27 May 2021 (UTC)
 * "clubs had only lost ten" only each lost ORR clubs had lost just ten games each...
 * Done.--EchetusXe 14:47, 27 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Link cross.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 14:47, 27 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Link pitch invasion.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 14:47, 27 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Link MP but re-jig that sentence so it's not a sea of blue.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 14:47, 27 May 2021 (UTC)
 * "but no enquiry was made" but none was made.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 14:47, 27 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Link penalty.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 14:47, 27 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Link aggregate.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 14:47, 27 May 2021 (UTC)
 * I normally put the dates of the play-off semi-finals in there.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 14:47, 27 May 2021 (UTC)
 * "a place Bristol Rovers had called their home ground since" -> "where BR had played their home matches since"
 * Done.--EchetusXe 14:47, 27 May 2021 (UTC)
 * ""Fulham's record of conceding a further 16 goals than Bristol Rovers over the course of the season showed and the Bristol team went through in emphatic style" bit commentator-ish, and not much detail on the goals.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 14:47, 27 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Does ref 8 really cite the whole para preceding it?
 * Done.--EchetusXe 14:47, 27 May 2021 (UTC)
 * "the referee for " link referee first time, but I would add this info into the match summaries right than jam them both together in the background section.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 14:47, 27 May 2021 (UTC)
 * "John Jeffers missed" overlinked.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 14:47, 27 May 2021 (UTC)
 * "on the 30th-minute" in the 30th minute
 * Done.--EchetusXe 14:47, 27 May 2021 (UTC)
 * "Darren Beckford" no need for first name after first mention.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 14:47, 27 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Link corner kick. The first time....
 * Done.--EchetusXe 14:47, 27 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Should ref 12 and ref 2 have the same work?
 * Done.--EchetusXe 14:47, 27 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Is that all that's available (to you) on the matches? I can help with Guardian/British Newspaper Archive/Gale if required.
 * Yes, please assist me.--EchetusXe 14:47, 27 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Not much on the Bristol Rovers team selections...
 * "1 – 1" unspaced en-dash.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 14:47, 27 May 2021 (UTC)
 * "recovered excellently from the" remove "excellently".
 * Done.--EchetusXe 14:47, 27 May 2021 (UTC)
 * "Vale lasted in " remained.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 14:47, 27 May 2021 (UTC)
 * "last-place" no hyphen.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 14:47, 27 May 2021 (UTC)
 * "Martyn would go on" went on
 * Done.--EchetusXe 14:47, 27 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Can you replace the table sources all with 11v11 so we have no issues over RS?
 * What do you mean?--EchetusXe 14:47, 27 May 2021 (UTC)
 * I'm not sure of the provenance of "www.englishfootballleaguetables.co.uk." yet 11v11 do league tables and that website has been agreed to be a reliable source. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 20:30, 29 May 2021 (UTC)
 * ok I'll see what I can dig out on those sites and let you know. There are a couple of points here which you can take a look at in the meantime. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 20:30, 29 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Okay thank you.--EchetusXe 12:33, 30 May 2021 (UTC)

Some clippings: do you have access to the British Newspaper Archive? If not I'll take a look, are you able to/happy to receive emails? The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 16:20, 2 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Guardian
 * Guardian
 * Guardian
 * Observer
 * Guardian
 * I've added a few interesting points from those clippings and there was a new article published today actually. I don't have a subscription to the newspaper archive but I can receive emails.--EchetusXe 16:20, 3 June 2021 (UTC)
 * I sent you some more stuff. Let me know when you're done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 15:46, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
 * I recieved one email with snippings but not a second ne. Thanks.--EchetusXe 13:17, 10 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Yeah, it was just one email along with the links above. Have you incorporated all you can from those? The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 11:07, 12 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Yes but the references for the emailed stuff doesn't seem to be working.--EchetusXe 13:20, 12 June 2021 (UTC)
 * They were PDFs?? The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 14:15, 12 June 2021 (UTC)
 * They had a section that says "link" at the bottom.--EchetusXe 08:52, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Oh, I don't get it. I sent four PDFs I think, they contained everything, no links required and as far as I know, no links sent.   There's a citation at the end of each one which has a URL if required, but all the material required is there, no need to go online for anything.  The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 10:30, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
 * No that's what I'm saying. I copied the citation for the articles references but they don't seem to work on the article.--EchetusXe 12:10, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Ok, that makes sense.  Just put them in as bare refs if you like and I'll fix them up. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 12:13, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Yeah they're in the article. Thanks.--EchetusXe 14:42, 14 June 2021 (UTC)

Tidied up and promoted. Cheers. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 20:43, 14 June 2021 (UTC)