Talk:1991 protest in Split/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 02:44, 4 July 2013 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:44, 4 July 2013 (UTC)
 * No DABs or duplicate links
 * External links good and image appropriately licensed.
 * Missing "the": obtain Yugoslav Presidency's, March, JNA itself, favour of expansion of Serbia, was 3,000-strong, view of JNA role, organised by Croatian, twice in this one: housed command centres of JNA, use if supply, Serbs in rapidly escalating
 * Missed two.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 22:04, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
 * Added. Thanks for pointing them out.--Tomobe03 (talk) 13:00, 8 July 2013 (UTC)
 * declared their intention of integration of the area under "declared their intent to integrate the area..."
 * dismissed rather "ignored" or "disregarded"
 * Whose hinterland? Serbia? Croatia?
 * The JNA was evacuated Who evacuated the JNA? Or did it evacuate itself?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 06:44, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
 * Thank you for taking up this review. I trust the above issues are now all addressed.--Tomobe03 (talk) 10:15, 7 July 2013 (UTC)