Talk:1993 Football League First Division play-off final/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 17:52, 24 July 2020 (UTC)

Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 17:52, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
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Lead

 * 1994-94 season should be 1993–94 season
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!&#33;!&#33;) 19:56, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Taylor and Thompson should have their first names included on the first mention
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!&#33;!&#33;) 19:56, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Wikilink Chelsea to Chelsea F.C.
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!&#33;!&#33;) 19:56, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Wikilink penalty to Penalty kick (association football)
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!&#33;!&#33;) 19:56, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Perhaps wikilink the mention of the word Premiership in the third paragraph to 1994–95 FA Premier League?
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!&#33;!&#33;) 19:56, 24 July 2020 (UTC)

Route to the final

 * "Maskell equalised before Swindon took Hoddle" - I'm not sure what the bold text is trying to say; perhaps a little rewording is in order?
 * Removed "Swindon took". The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!&#33;!&#33;) 19:58, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
 * "It was the only goal of the game with the match ending 1–0." - how about It was the only goal of the match with it ending 1–0.
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!&#33;!&#33;) 19:58, 24 July 2020 (UTC)

Background

 * "which was played over two legs had ended 2–2, and had played in the second tier since that promotion." - close repetition of the term "played"
 * Split. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!&#33;!&#33;) 20:00, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
 * "the club's promotion was overturned by the Football League as a result of financial irregularities, and the club" - close repetition of the word "club"
 * Repeat removed. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!&#33;!&#33;) 20:00, 24 July 2020 (UTC)

Summary

 * "from Maskell found Hoddle who shot was curled" - whose
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!&#33;!&#33;) 20:02, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
 * "Mitchell then saw his shot smothered" - by whom?
 * Source doesn't say. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!&#33;!&#33;) 20:02, 24 July 2020 (UTC)

Post-match

 * Wikilink the final mention of the term Premiership in this section to 1994–95 FA Premier League
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!&#33;!&#33;) 20:04, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
 * "Eurosport listed the match as 94th best association football match" - close repetition of the same word as highlighted in bold
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!&#33;!&#33;) 20:04, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
 * "as 94th best association football match" - as the 94th
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!&#33;!&#33;) 20:04, 24 July 2020 (UTC)