Talk:1993 Football League Second Division play-off final/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 21:26, 13 May 2021 (UTC)

Comments (and suggest these are implemented, in principle, in the other GAN) THat's a first pass, I'll put it on  hold while we deal with these and then do another run-through. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 10:22, 16 May 2021 (UTC)
 * "while the teams placed from" -> "while those placed from"
 * Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
 * "table partook in play-off semi-finals; the winners of these semi-finals " -> "took part in play-offs; the winners of the play-off semi-finals..."
 * Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
 * "West Brom had" stick with formal names or introduce nicknames.
 * Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Same for Vale.
 * Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Link referee in lead.
 * Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
 * "The pivotal point of the match" a bit OR.
 * Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Link sent off.
 * Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
 * "goals difference" -> "goal difference" and link.
 * Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
 * I would use the sports table module for the league, as seen in 1991 Football League Fourth Division play-off Final for example.  Seems more accessible etc.
 * Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
 * "the first leg was" -> "first match of the two-legged tie.
 * Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
 * "Giant striker..." avoid such commentary.
 * Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Play-off semifinal reports seem to be unreferenced.
 * Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
 * "1992–93 season" I know it's red linked anyway, but put the "season" into the pipe.
 * Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
 * "tally of namesake" not really requied.
 * Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
 * "42,300 Baggies" don't use nicknames unless you explain them.
 * Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
 * "Vale showing patience and possession" according to?
 * Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
 * "a scissors kick" link.
 * Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
 * "by Ian Taylor tipped" overlink.
 * Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
 * "used his acrobatic skills" bit too commentatorish.
 * Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Link foul.
 * Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
 * "dismissal" link.
 * Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
 * "third Englishman" what  about non-Englishmen?
 * The source didn't mention them.--EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
 * "for the "Baggies" final goal" nickname
 * Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
 * "from six yards" convert.
 * Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Could crop the Ardilles image so it doesn't leak down  into the refs.
 * Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
 * "£2 million" non-breaking space.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 15:56, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
 * "afterwards... my" non-breaking space before the ellpsis.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 15:56, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
 * "after barely surviving" can we be factual and  explain what that really meant?
 * Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
 * "Red carded Peter Swan" not necessary, not even sure this sentence  is required.
 * Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
 * I don't think www and .com are needed for websites.
 * Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Okay thanks, I've taken a crack at that.--EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)

I think this is good enough now for GA, I made a few cosmetic tweaks, so I'm happy to promote. I'll take a look at the other one of yours as well, perhaps you could pre-empt my review by considering some of the general points above on that article too? Cheers. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 06:58, 26 May 2021 (UTC)