Talk:1994 Football League Third Division play-off final/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Usernameunique (talk · contribs) 18:51, 12 March 2021 (UTC)

Lead
 * a passing move from Wycombe — What does this mean?
 * A move involving passing? The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 21:33, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
 * That doesn't clarify things. Looking at the source does. I've amended the text accordingly. --Usernameunique (talk) 04:23, 23 March 2021 (UTC)

Route to the final
 * Darren Moore then scored with a volley in the 57th minute — It's unclear what team this was for until the next few sentences. Maybe something like "Darren Moore then doubled the score with a volley..." would make it clearer.
 * Clarified. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 21:45, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Ellis scored with a header to put Preston ahead but Torquay's Gregory Goodridge equalised after going one-on-one with Woods. — Minutes?
 * Not mentioned. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 21:45, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Moore was sent off for punching Paul Raynor — Any word on what set him off?
 * No, it literally says "... was sent off for punching Paul Rayner." The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 21:45, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
 * A goal from Stuart Hicks levelled the tie on aggregate — What minute? Also, suggest adding the match score (3–1) here.
 * No minute, score added. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 21:45, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Raynor scored with a header and Preston progressed to the final with a 4–3 aggregate victory — Likewise, suggest adding the match score (4–1).
 * Score added. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 21:45, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
 * caught by Garner on the break — What minute? Link break to Glossary of association football terms?
 * Done both. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 21:38, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
 * wrong-footing — What does this mean?
 * Per the Merriam-Webster dictionary: "to cause (someone, such as an opponent in soccer or tennis) to lean into or step with the wrong foot broadly". The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 21:33, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Interesting, didn't realize it was a term that had made its way into a dictionary. Worth linking as "wrongfooting"? I'm not sure if linking words to Wiktionary definitions is frowned upon. --Usernameunique (talk) 04:28, 23 March 2021 (UTC)

Summary
 * Guppy's shot — Minute?
 * Sources don't say. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 21:33, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Ian Bryson became the first player of the match to be shown the yellow card in the 16th minute — What did he do?
 * Sources don't say. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 21:33, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
 * an attempt by Preston's Jamie Squires to defend Thompson's strike put the ball into the net for an own goal — Any more details on this?
 * No, it says "A desperate attempt by Preston's Squires to get to the shot only helped it over the line." The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 21:46, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
 * a passing move from Wycombe — What does this mean?
 * A move involving passing? The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 21:33, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Glyn Creaser became the first Wycombe player to be shown the yellow card — What did he do?
 * Sources don't say. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 21:33, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Gareth Ainsworth was then booked in the 49th minute — What did he do? Also, maybe avoid saying "booked", which is jargon.
 * Sources don't say, and it's really not jargon, it's absolutely a fact. It's called a "booking".  I could link it to the glossary if it's really a major issue.  The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 21:33, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Garner was then booked in the 75th minute — Ditto & ditto
 * Ditto and ditto. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 21:33, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
 * at their first attempt, earning back-to-back promotions. — This is repeated below. Any reason to have it twice?
 * Yes, it was for DYK. It's removed now.  The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 21:33, 13 March 2021 (UTC)

Details
 * Missing time of match
 * Added. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 21:54, 13 March 2021 (UTC)

Post-match
 * one place outside the play-offs — And how many points?
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 21:36, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
 * losing at the semi-final stage — Anything to link to (e.g., the "Route to the final" section of the appropriate article)?
 * The relevant overall play-off article is already linked in the previous sentence. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 21:36, 13 March 2021 (UTC)

References Overall
 * #2, 3, 4, 5 — Only 4 & 5 have archived links. But do the links actually do anything for you? They just take me to a page saying I need to register.
 * I use the archive tool on the talkpage which (I guess) is accredited by WMF. I don't do anything more than that, if it's malfunctioning then I guess a ticket should be raised but I think that's outside the scope of the GAN.  I'll happily remove archived links, but it's not unreasonable to ask for registration I guess.  The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 21:33, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
 * #13 — Can you find and clip this from newspapers.com?
 * Replaced. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 21:49, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
 * , all yours. --Usernameunique (talk) 18:51, 12 March 2021 (UTC)
 * all addressed and/or responded to. It's quite common in the earlier contemporary reports that finer details like goal times were not reported in post-match reports, by the way.  Cheers.  The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 21:54, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
 * , passing now. Two comments (including one possible suggestion) above. Makes sense re: details not showing up in post-match reports; I just figure that I'll ask, and if there's nothing to add then there's nothing to add.