Talk:1995 Football League Third Division play-off final/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 22:08, 14 June 2021 (UTC)

Will review MWright96 (talk) 22:08, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * "The top two teams of the 1997–98 Football League Third Division, Carlisle United and Walsall, gained automatic promotion to the Second Division, while the teams placed from third to sixth place" - repetition of "teams"
 * "The top two teams of the 1997–98 Football League Third Division," - wrong season
 * "Chesterfield won the match 2–0 with goals from Tony Lormor and Phil Robinson to gain promotion back to the third tier of English football five seasons after being relegated." - maybe mention the goals were scored in the first half?
 * Perphaps wikilink the term manager to the appropriate article only on the first mention?

Route to the final

 * "The second leg was held at Gigg Lane in Bury three days later." - needs verification with a reliable source
 * "Tony Rigby put the home team ahead with a 20 yards (18 m) volley" - can be changed to yard or reword part of the sentence

Background

 * "Bury had played in the Third Division since being relegated in the 1991–92 season." - shouldn't that be fourth tier since it was called the Fourth Division that season?
 * The term manager might want to be wikilinked only on the first mention

Summary

 * Wikilink Wembley Stadium to the appropriate article
 * "Kelly saved attempts from both Robinson and second-half substitute Kevin Davies" - elucidate please on what saving attempts mean

Post-match

 * manager player should be one wikilink not two