Talk:1997 Women's Cricket World Cup final/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kosack (talk · contribs) 09:12, 13 August 2020 (UTC)

I'll take this one on, will post review as soon as possible. Kosack (talk) 09:12, 13 August 2020 (UTC)

Lead

 * Might be worth linking wickets here for the uninitiated.
 * Links for the Indian and English teams in the second paragraph?
 * Linked both. Harrias  talk 13:29, 14 August 2020 (UTC)

Background

 * You use both eleven and 12 in successive sections here.
 * Changed both to words. Harrias  talk 13:29, 14 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Worth mentioning that England were the reigning holders?
 * Added. Harrias  talk 13:29, 14 August 2020 (UTC)

Australia

 * Would the Ireland match have been counted in the final table standings? If so, would be worth explaining how they awarded points for it.
 * Have added a little, let me know if you think more is needed (in which case, I would need to explain the whole scoring system.) Harrias  talk 13:29, 14 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Worth linking wickets and One Day International again here.
 * Linked. Harrias  talk 13:29, 14 August 2020 (UTC)
 * "Australia scored 123 for seven led scores of 33 and 31", led by?
 * Oops, added. Harrias  talk 13:29, 14 August 2020 (UTC)

New Zealand

 * "uneven number of teams, only featured four other teams", a little repetitive with the double use of teams perhaps.
 * Changed the second to "sides". Harrias  talk 13:29, 14 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Worth linking umpires perhaps?
 * Linked. Harrias  talk 13:29, 14 August 2020 (UTC)

Summary

 * In the lead, you have no link for Calcutta but include one here. I'd either have both linked or neither.
 * Removed. Harrias  talk 13:29, 14 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Emily Drumm is linked here but there is a Drumm mentioned in their route to the final section. I'm assuming it's the same one so the link needs moving up.
 * Sorted. Harrias  talk 13:29, 14 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Along similar lines, you drop the first name for Fitzpatrick, but include the first name for Hockley (and Drumm if the above point is agreed) in the same sentence.
 * Tidied. Harrias  talk 13:29, 14 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Note b is a little oddly placed as it seems to be describing the scoring method, but at this point it's halfway through the article and there are frequent uses of it prior.
 * Moved to the first use. Harrias  talk 13:29, 14 August 2020 (UTC)