Talk:1998 Atlantic hurricane season/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 18:49, 21 August 2013 (UTC)


 * "It officially began on June 1 and ended on November 30, dates which conventionally delimit the period during which most tropical cyclones form in the Atlantic Ocean. " source? YE Pacific  Hurricane 18:49, 21 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 19:04, 21 August 2013 (UTC)


 * "at Category 3 intensity." remove this, it's not that important. YE Pacific  Hurricane 18:49, 21 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 19:04, 21 August 2013 (UTC)


 * Make the season outlooks/season acitivty sections leave 2 headers. Why are they combined? It's not logical or continent! YE Pacific  Hurricane 18:49, 21 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Better?--12george1 (talk) 19:04, 21 August 2013 (UTC)


 * "a hurricane hunter" link to Hurricane Hunter :P YE Pacific  Hurricane
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 19:04, 21 August 2013 (UTC)


 * "Additionally, many windows were blown out of hotels in Virginia Beach.[12]" remove that, it's not important. YE Pacific  Hurricane 18:49, 21 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Done--12george1 (talk) 19:04, 21 August 2013 (UTC)


 * "Flooding was also occurred in northern Mexico, " m "was". YE Pacific  Hurricane 18:49, 21 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 19:04, 21 August 2013 (UTC)


 * "However, thereafter, the storm oscillated in intensity for several days," "however, thereafter" just is not correct, throw "however" out of the article and into the ocean :P YE Pacific  Hurricane 18:49, 21 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 19:04, 21 August 2013 (UTC)


 * "Severe erosion" what kind of erosion? Beach erosion? YE Pacific  Hurricane 18:49, 21 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Yep--12george1 (talk) 19:04, 21 August 2013 (UTC)


 * Cut back on Georges section please. YE Pacific  Hurricane 18:49, 21 August 2013 (UTC)
 * I cut it down slightly. Because Georges was a significant storm and impacted several countries/regions/states, that might be the best I can do.--12george1 (talk) 19:04, 21 August 2013 (UTC)


 * "Overall, Mitch caused $6.2 billion in losses and at least 18,974 people were left dead.[65][66][49][70][71][72]" order refs numerically YE Pacific  Hurricane 18:49, 21 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 19:04, 21 August 2013 (UTC)