Talk:1999 Pacific hurricane season/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 16:33, 2 March 2013 (UTC)


 * "The season officially began on May 15 in the Eastern Pacific, and on June 1 in the Central Pacific; in both basins," just 140W lines here to avoid confusion on why CPAC storms are included in this article. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  16:33, 2 March 2013 (UTC)
 * Not sure what you are asking me to do here.--12george1 (talk) 20:26, 2 March 2013 (UTC)


 * The lead is a bit long for EPAC season articles: "Hurricane Dora was the most intense cyclone, with a peak intensity of 145 mph (220 km/h), equivalent to Category 4 hurricane status on the Saffir–Simpson hurricane scale. With a total track length of 6,500 mi (10,500 km), Dora had the second longest track of a Pacific hurricane on record, behind only Hurricane John in the 1994 season." just condense this to "Hurricane Dora was a long-lived an intense cyclone, which had the second longest track of a Pacific hurricane on record". YE  Pacific   Hurricane  16:33, 2 March 2013 (UTC)
 * Ok, done--12george1 (talk) 20:08, 2 March 2013 (UTC)

*Some of the extra details placed here could IMO be placed in the season summary. It summaries the season pretty well,just not inline with the other EPAC seasons. Looks like you already done that; you read my mind :). YE  Pacific   Hurricane  16:33, 2 March 2013 (UTC)
 * Do you know how many storms received recon? YE  Pacific   Hurricane  16:33, 2 March 2013 (UTC)
 * Per the first page of the MWR, "There were no reconnaissance ﬂights into eastern North Paciﬁc tropical cyclones in 1999".--12george1 (talk) 20:05, 2 March 2013 (UTC)


 * Add the 1 person missing and peak rainfall total to Adrain's section. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  16:33, 2 March 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 20:05, 2 March 2013 (UTC)


 * Wasn't Beatriz annular? YE  Pacific   Hurricane  16:33, 2 March 2013 (UTC)
 * Apparently not. --12george1 (talk) 20:05, 2 March 2013 (UTC)


 * "By this time howeve" comma after time. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  16:33, 2 March 2013 (UTC)
 * Ok, but it seems kinda odd, since I have a comma after the next word (however).--12george1 (talk) 19:51, 2 March 2013 (UTC)


 * "A tropical wave crossed the Atlantic Ocean" why is Atlantic Ocean linked? YE  Pacific   Hurricane  16:33, 2 March 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 19:51, 2 March 2013 (UTC)


 * "reached the Eastern Pacific Ocean" change ocean to basin IMO. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  16:33, 2 March 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed, if you are talking about the one in TD6-E's section.--12george1 (talk) 19:51, 2 March 2013 (UTC)


 * I'd touch base on Droa's WPAC history.
 * Better?--12george1 (talk) 20:26, 2 March 2013 (UTC)


 * Add a note in Dora's infobox that it left the basin before dissipating. YE  Pacific   Hurricane
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 19:51, 2 March 2013 (UTC)


 * Any TC watches for Eleven? YE  Pacific   Hurricane  16:33, 2 March 2013 (UTC)
 * Nope, the Preliminary Report does not mention anything watches or warnings.--12george1 (talk) 19:51, 2 March 2013 (UTC)


 * I'd add a tad of MX impact to Greg's section. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  16:33, 2 March 2013 (UTC)
 * I already did; roughly 2/3 of that second paragraph is about Mexico.--12george1 (talk) 19:51, 2 March 2013 (UTC)


 * "There were no known reports of injuries or deaths from the storm.[29]" why is it here then? YE  Pacific   Hurricane  16:33, 2 March 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 19:51, 2 March 2013 (UTC)


 * " strong mid-tropospheric ridge " link to the ridge article plz. Thanks. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  16:33, 2 March 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 19:51, 2 March 2013 (UTC)


 * "While passing offshore, Irwin brought patches of heavy rainfall to some areas of Mexico, peaking at 9.92 inches (252 mm) in Coahuayutla de Guerrero, Guerrero.[12] T" mentioned this add the end of the paragraph, it's not like it affected multiple places. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  16:33, 2 March 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 19:51, 2 March 2013 (UTC)


 * Any TC watches for Irwin? YE  Pacific   Hurricane  16:33, 2 March 2013 (UTC)
 * Nope, the Preliminary Report doesn't say anything regarding that.--12george1 (talk) 19:51, 2 March 2013 (UTC)


 * Fix Ref 3, it is broken. YE  Pacific   Hurricane
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 20:05, 2 March 2013 (UTC)


 * Link Avila on Ref 18, not 27 IMO. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  16:33, 2 March 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 20:05, 2 March 2013 (UTC)


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