Talk:1: Nenokkadine/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 14:56, 23 February 2016 (UTC)

I'll have this done today or tomorrow JAG  UAR   14:56, 23 February 2016 (UTC)

Initial comments

 * The lead is perfect. I couldn't find any issues here
 * A couple of paragraphs in the Plot section could easily be merged in order to improve prose flow. I think the last five paragraphs are fairly short and some of them could be merged
 * Belfast is linked twice in the Plot section
 * "According to his doctor, if Gautham can hallucinate a person other than the three men he can be treated" - comma needed in between "men" and "he"
 * "Antonio Rosarios, a Goa-based crime boss who wants to kill her because she tried to expose the presence of hydrogen cyanide in seeds sold by AG1 (his company)" - who's company? Rosarios?
 * "Gautham learns that the aged taxi driver he met previously is really a businessman" - remove 'really', sounds a tad informal
 * "Rathnavelu shifted from chrome to black-and-white to full colour in sync with the story's mood" - synchronisation
 * "The next schedule, which began on 18 June, filmed in London and Belfast for 60 days" - delink London and Belfast here, both are already linked previously in the article
 * "Rathnavelu called the action scene in a London 'parking lot" - car park
 * "1: Nenokkadine received generally-negative reviews from critics" - why is there a hyphen here? I use "generally negative/positive" without the hyphen, it should be fine to lose it
 * No dead links

On hold
Is this a one I should watch? I remember watching the trailer and I can understand why some of the reviews are negative. The article is great, it is well written, well sourced and I couldn't find one issue with any of the sources. Once all of the minor points above are addressed, I'll be happy to promote this! JAG UAR   21:17, 23 February 2016 (UTC)
 * 1: Nenokkadine is a case of wasted opportunities. Except for some four or five sequences, nothing actually impress us and it is its inherent issue. But what i loved was its intermission sequence and the fight in the car park. Anyways, thanks for reviewing the article, Jaguar. I've addressed the issues and i hope it is good to go now. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 02:16, 24 February 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks for addressing them, Pavan! Without further ado I'll pass this. Another excellent article. I really enjoy Telugu films, and I've started to watch them more than American films in recent months. It's a long story, but I'm slowly ignoring all of the recent commercial films. I'll take your advice and won't watch this film, though it's a shame that they wasted such good opportunities such as great shooting locations such as London.  JAG  UAR   22:43, 24 February 2016 (UTC)