Talk:1st Armoured Regiment (Australia)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:49, 31 July 2010 (UTC) GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance:
 * I think this is done now. Anotherclown (talk) 09:09, 1 August 2010 (UTC)
 * I think this is done now. Anotherclown (talk) 09:09, 1 August 2010 (UTC)
 * I think this is done now. Anotherclown (talk) 09:09, 1 August 2010 (UTC)


 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * Probably nothing... I have removed the cites where possible and added Hopkins (which I had at home so now I'm back from overseas I have been able to use it). I believe it is now only used for the more of the trivial information (i.e. regimental marches etc in the infobox). Not sure I can find any refs to replace these but I will have a look. Anotherclown (talk) 09:09, 1 August 2010 (UTC)
 * Replaced a few more. Anotherclown (talk) 07:37, 2 August 2010 (UTC)
 * The things cited by australian-armour.com are now trivial enough not to matter, IMO.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:11, 5 August 2010 (UTC)
 * Replaced a few more. Anotherclown (talk) 07:37, 2 August 2010 (UTC)
 * The things cited by australian-armour.com are now trivial enough not to matter, IMO.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:11, 5 August 2010 (UTC)


 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * WW2 mentioned in the lede, and I have now clarified arrival date of the Centurions in 1952. Also added info on raising of Sqns in the 1950s and clarified the re-raising of A Sqn in 1968. Anotherclown (talk) 09:09, 1 August 2010 (UTC)
 * Also added a bit more on WW2 ops in the prose with refs to Hopkins. Anotherclown (talk) 07:37, 2 August 2010 (UTC)
 * WW2 mentioned in the lede, and I have now clarified arrival date of the Centurions in 1952. Also added info on raising of Sqns in the 1950s and clarified the re-raising of A Sqn in 1968. Anotherclown (talk) 09:09, 1 August 2010 (UTC)
 * Also added a bit more on WW2 ops in the prose with refs to Hopkins. Anotherclown (talk) 07:37, 2 August 2010 (UTC)


 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * Will see what I can do. Anotherclown (talk) 09:09, 1 August 2010 (UTC)
 * Just to jump in, I've been looking for a PD photo of an Australian M-1 for the last few years, but without any success. Nick-D (talk) 10:30, 1 August 2010 (UTC)
 * Cheers Nick, yeah not having much luck either. There are plenty of images on the Defence site but fair use might be difficult to establish. Had a look through the US DoD site in the hope they might have something from Talisman Saber last year but to no avail... Anotherclown (talk) 05:52, 2 August 2010 (UTC)
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * Will see what I can do. Anotherclown (talk) 09:09, 1 August 2010 (UTC)
 * Just to jump in, I've been looking for a PD photo of an Australian M-1 for the last few years, but without any success. Nick-D (talk) 10:30, 1 August 2010 (UTC)
 * Cheers Nick, yeah not having much luck either. There are plenty of images on the Defence site but fair use might be difficult to establish. Had a look through the US DoD site in the hope they might have something from Talisman Saber last year but to no avail... Anotherclown (talk) 05:52, 2 August 2010 (UTC)
 * Cheers Nick, yeah not having much luck either. There are plenty of images on the Defence site but fair use might be difficult to establish. Had a look through the US DoD site in the hope they might have something from Talisman Saber last year but to no avail... Anotherclown (talk) 05:52, 2 August 2010 (UTC)


 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:


 * Thanks again for taking the time to review the article and for your fixes and suggestions. Cheers. Anotherclown (talk) 21:12, 5 August 2010 (UTC)