Talk:2000 Spanish Grand Prix/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 13:31, 10 January 2016 (UTC)

I'll be happy to take this review. This is the first time I've reviewed a Formula One article! JAG UAR   13:31, 10 January 2016 (UTC)

Initial comments

 * "at the Circuit de Catalunya, Montmeló, Barcelona, Catalonia, Spain" - some overlinking here. Might be worth either de-linking 'Spain' or removing 'Catalonia'
 * Spain has been delinked
 * "Williams were third with twelve points" - was?
 * Corrected
 * "and BAR" - would it be worth writing out British American Racing (BAR) fully on the first time?
 * Yes I have done that
 * "The weather remained dry for the Saturday-morning practice sessions" - no need for the hyphen here
 * Removed hyphen
 * "Ralf Schumacher started the race in the spare Williams because his race car developed a sensor issue" - what does 'spare Williams' mean?
 * It means the spare Williams monocoque.
 * No dead links

This is a great article, both well written and comprehensive. I found very little issues to bring up. Once all of the above are clarified, you can have a GA!  JAG  UAR   13:03, 11 January 2016 (UTC)
 * All the above issues have been dealt with. Z105space   (talk)  14:04, 11 January 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks for addressing them swiftly! This is good to go now.  JAG  UAR   17:44, 11 January 2016 (UTC)