Talk:2001 Scottish Masters/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Usernameunique (talk · contribs) 06:12, 18 April 2020 (UTC)

Lead
 * O'Sullivan made the highest break of the competition of 134 in his semi-final victory over Williams. — This doesn't appear to be in the body of the article.
 * Added MWright96 (talk) 09:29, 18 April 2020 (UTC)

Background
 * one of the first of the season. — traditionally one of the first of the season, or it just happened to be one of the first in 2001–02?
 * Removed MWright96 (talk) 09:29, 18 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Any player who withdrew would be replaced by a reserve — How were reserves determined?
 * There are no further details MWright96 (talk) 09:29, 18 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Perhaps add in the first sentence that one spot was filled via a qualifying competition.
 * Done MWright96 (talk) 09:29, 18 April 2020 (UTC)
 * John Higgins, Scotland's highest-ranked player — Suggest "John Higgins, Scotland's highest-ranked player and the world's number ##"
 * Done MWright96 (talk) 09:29, 18 April 2020 (UTC)
 * By the time I got to "Round 1" I still had no idea who the players were, who was favored, etc. Perhaps the players who qualified by being in the top 8 could be listed somewhere along with their ranking, and the seeds for the tournament bracket could be added?
 * Added MWright96 (talk) 09:29, 18 April 2020 (UTC)
 * John Higgins and Mark Williams are both listed as three seeds. --Usernameunique (talk) 09:42, 18 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Corrected MWright96 (talk) 10:02, 18 April 2020 (UTC)

Prize fund
 * Highest break (×1): £5,000 — What does the "×1" mean?
 * It means that one person could earn the prize monies available
 * Which source is used for the highest break amount? --Usernameunique (talk) 09:44, 18 April 2020 (UTC)
 * RTE Sport MWright96 (talk) 10:02, 18 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Total: £200,000 — Did all 12 players win some of this?
 * Yes, but am unable to find other amounts MWright96 (talk) 09:29, 18 April 2020 (UTC)

Round 1
 * ranking event winner — What's a ranking event?
 * Added wikilink MWright96 (talk) 09:29, 18 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Frank Callan — Who's this, just a random coach? Worth a red link?
 * Clarified and no red link would be appropriate MWright96 (talk) 09:29, 18 April 2020 (UTC)

Semi-finals
 * Williams was required to the pink ball from a long distance to tie the match at 2–2; it was left on the edge of a top corner pocket. — This probably belongs before the sentence about who won.
 * Done MWright96 (talk) 09:29, 18 April 2020 (UTC)

Final
 * It was the first time since the 2000 Grand Prix that O'Sullivan had been defeated in a tournament final. — How many tournaments ago was that?
 * Added months instead MWright96 (talk) 09:29, 18 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Any word on when Higgins's child was born?
 * Added MWright96 (talk) 09:29, 18 April 2020 (UTC)

Qualifying
 * Is there enough in the sources to add information about the matches that goes beyond the bracket?
 * Not particularly and it's not the standard in WikiProject Snooker to add every detail about a tournament's qualifying matches, except for maximum breaks or unusual events. MWright96 (talk) 09:29, 18 April 2020 (UTC)

Overall
 * , comments above. --Usernameunique (talk) 06:25, 18 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Have made changes and have replied where appropriate. MWright96 (talk) 09:29, 18 April 2020 (UTC)
 * , two further comments/questions above. --Usernameunique (talk) 09:49, 18 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Looks good, . Passing. --Usernameunique (talk) 10:04, 18 April 2020 (UTC)