Talk:2002 Delphi Indy 300/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kpgjhpjm (talk · contribs) 13:43, 24 September 2018 (UTC)

Will review this one. I hope this should be done in a week. Kpg jhp  jm  13:43, 24 September 2018 (UTC)

Lead

 * posing the fastest lap you meant posting.
 * after Helio Castroneves was overtaken by him can be reworded to  after he overtook Hélio Castroneves

Background

 * The sentence part of the Indy Racing League (IRL) 2002 can be reworded to part of the 2002 Indy Racing League (IRL) schedule .  Kpg  jhp  jm  15:16, 26 September 2018 (UTC)
 * What happened to Foyt and who was Heam and for which team he drove ?
 * Link the redlinked Belterra Casino Indy 300 to Kentucky Indy 300.

Practice and Qualifying

 * How can drivers run for 1 hour in a 30 minute session ?
 * If the slowest time meant the slowest between two laps of a driver, write slower or if it means the slowest time among all then write - driver with the slowest time failing to qualify.

Race

 * Any source for the weather information ?
 * Who chose a front-wing change and why ?
 * Unser got ahead of de Ferran around the outside for fourth place at turn one on the 43rd lap. - when did de Ferran pass Unser ?
 * Too many mentions of the word de Ferran suggest replacing with his or him
 * I find weird that why people change front wings ? (Personal comment)
 * What is meant by crowding him . Kpg  jhp  jm  15:08, 28 September 2018 (UTC)

Comments

 * Review done ! Kpg  jhp  jm  03:20, 29 September 2018 (UTC)
 * That should be all the above points done. MWright96 (talk) 07:59, 29 September 2018 (UTC)
 * One issue remains unaddressed - the third issue in the Race section.  Kpg  jhp  jm  08:50, 29 September 2018 (UTC)
 * That particular sentence has been rewritten and should be more clearer. MWright96 (talk) 09:44, 29 September 2018 (UTC)