Talk:2003 BDO World Darts Championship/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 08:45, 5 April 2020 (UTC)

Comments Decent article, so this is it for a first pass. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 20:13, 5 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Infobox could use a 2003 in front of "Embassy World Darts Championship"
 * "It is one of two world championships in the game of darts:" "as of"?
 * " in Frimley Green, Surrey and " comma after Surrey.
 * "27 players automatically " avoid starting sentences with a number.
 * " at Bridlington Spa, Bridlington on " comma before "on".
 * "quarter and semi-finals" quarter-
 * "Spa, Bridlington on" comma before "on" again.
 * " held to the best-of-five sets." again, seems odd to me, "held as"..?
 * "(x2) do you mean "×2"?
 * "Martin Adams (pictured in 2012) was eliminated in the second-round of the competition" full stop.
 * "Two double one ring " etc. Should this really be "Two double-one-ring-finishes" etc?
 * "unable to challenge Van Barneveld during the game" not really, he challenged him, but not very well, re-word.
 * "when the referee called for a sudden death " it sounds like the ref just did this, perhaps "referee confirmed a sudden death" or something, he was just following the rules, right?
 * Check all image captions, if they're complete sentences, add a full stop.
 * "9 Dart Checkout" why the caps?
 * "Finalists (x2)" de-cap and use multiplication sign.
 * Eric is Erik.
 * Have made the changes requested MWright96 (talk) 06:31, 6 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Okay, missed the multiplication symbol one (better for you to check each thing off individually) but it looks okay now, so I'm promoting. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 09:33, 6 April 2020 (UTC)