Talk:2004 Les Saintes earthquake/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 16:00, 5 January 2023 (UTC)


 * I will be able to get to this later tonight.  𓃦 LunaEatsTuna  (💬) 16:00, 5 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Sorry for the delay! Please ping me once you have addressed these concerns of mine. Thanks,  𓃦 LunaEatsTuna  (💬) 15:15, 6 January 2023 (UTC)
 * I will address the issues in a day or two. Been a hectic weekend for me. Thank you for understanding. Dora the Axe-plorer (explore) 16:27, 7 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Hi @LunaEatsTuna, I've addressed the issues you've raised. Thank you. Dora the Axe-plorer (explore) 00:31, 8 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Nice work! Thanks for wikilinking color-tagged structure. I am now happy to pass this article for GA status.  𓃦 LunaEatsTuna  (💬) 03:46, 8 January 2023 (UTC)

Copyvio
Earwig says good to go. No concerns from me after reading the sources either.

Prose

 * "the eastern boundary is that of the Lesser Antilles subduction zone" – first mention in the body, wikilink Lesser Antilles subduction zone
 * "A maximum intensity of VIII (Heavily damaging)" – maybe reiterate that this was recorded via the European macroseismic scale?
 * "and a college were red-tagged" – red-tagged?
 * "that occurred about 7 km (4.3 mi) to the northwest of the" – "to the" is unnecessary.
 * "and wall and roof damage (including at some locations that were damaged during the mainshock)." – this is personal taste but I find it visually unappealing when a sentence ends with parentheses like this; there are two punctuation marks plus the citation. Suggest "and wall and roof damage—including at some locations that were damaged during the mainshock."
 * "scientists were on scene within several days to investigate." – reads a bit like an upbeat news article; maybe "scientists were on scene several days later to investigate."?
 * There are a few instances of "sea dropped" – should "sea" be "sea level" here?
 * Add WP:ALT text to the image.
 * Recommend adding Template:Use mdy dates and Template:Use X English under the short description.

Refs

 * Refs 3 and 7 look to be dead links.

Spot check on refs 5 and 8 show no concerns—they both support their cited content. I have access to ref 5 via the Wikipedia Library.

Other
Navs and cats all good.