Talk:2005 Football League Championship play-off final/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 08:53, 2 October 2020 (UTC)

Going to review for the GAN October 2020 Backlog Drive. MWright96 (talk) 08:53, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * "took part in play-off semi-finals;" - shouldn't it be the play-off semi-finals;
 * Not necessarily, it's not been in a problem in the other 20 or so GAs, and it reads fine to me. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!&#33;!&#33;) 16:34, 2 October 2020 (UTC)

Route to the final

 * Should East London be wikilinked?
 * Why not. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!&#33;!&#33;) 16:39, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Who was involved in the defensive mix up that allowed Kuqi to score?
 * Added. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!&#33;!&#33;) 16:39, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
 * "Preston North End played Derby County, the first leg being played at" - repetition of the word "played"
 * Reworded. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!&#33;!&#33;) 16:39, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
 * "after David Nugent beat Lee Camp in the Derby goal after picking up a flicked pass from Chris Sedgwick." - I beleive the first use of the word "after" can be changed to an appropriate relevant alternative word
 * Adjusted. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!&#33;!&#33;) 16:39, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Wikilink header to the approrpiate article on the first mention
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!&#33;!&#33;) 16:39, 2 October 2020 (UTC)

Background

 * Repka's full name should be mentioned here and not in the summary since it is the first time he is mentioned
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!&#33;!&#33;) 16:47, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Maybe clarify it was Brian O'Neill's right eye that got headbutted?
 * Sure. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!&#33;!&#33;) 16:47, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Wikilink Football League Division Two
 * Fixed name and linked. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!&#33;!&#33;) 16:47, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
 * "Preston had played in the second tier of English football since gaining promotion in the 1999–2000 season as champions of Football League Division Two, and had not played" - repetition of "played"
 * Addressed. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!&#33;!&#33;) 16:47, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
 * "Winning the play-off final was estimated to be worth" - estimated by whom?
 * The media. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!&#33;!&#33;) 16:47, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
 * "who represented the West Riding County Football Association." - not mentioned by ESPN. Another source will be needed to verify this
 * West Riding is Yorkshire, so I'll use the BBC source. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!&#33;!&#33;) 16:47, 2 October 2020 (UTC)

Summary

 * Wikilink Millennium Stadium and free kick
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!&#33;!&#33;) 16:52, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Delink Tomáš Řepka and just his surname is sufficent
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!&#33;!&#33;) 16:52, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
 * "twisting his knee." - right knee
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!&#33;!&#33;) 16:52, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Why was Walker booked just after sustaining his knee injury?
 * None of the sources state it explicitly but he carried the ball out of the area so I would assume it was handball/denying a goal-scoring opportunity, but as it's not verifiable, it can't go in. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!&#33;!&#33;) 16:52, 2 October 2020 (UTC)

Post-match

 * Wikilink Premier League to 2005–06 FA Premier League and Championship to 2005–06 Football League Championship
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!&#33;!&#33;) 16:53, 2 October 2020 (UTC)

Reference
Am putting the review hold to allow the nominator to address or query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 11:53, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Reference 21 is missing the newspaper that printed the story
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!&#33;!&#33;) 16:54, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Cheers,, all addressed and/or responded to. Thanks for your review.  The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!&#33;!&#33;) 16:54, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 17:34, 2 October 2020 (UTC)