Talk:2005 Qeshm earthquake/GA1

GA Review
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Comments

 * Insert a full stop after "13:53 local time (10:23 UTC)".
 * Reports of its strength on the moment magnitude scale show that the earthquake was about 6.0 on the Moment magnitude scale. – This sentence doesn't make any sense to me. Maybe replace it with "Reports of its strength show that the earthquake was about 6.0 on the Moment magnitude scale"?
 * Three aftershocks followed the main shock, and the earthquake occurred during the Trial of Saddam Hussein. – Full stop after "shock".
 * Qeshm Island should be linked in the Background section, not the Damage and casualties section (plus it's a redirect).
 * Ref number 4 should be put after the comma in the second paragraph of the Background section.
 * 80& – I think you mean "80%".
 * "The earthquake was reported at in Oman."
 * One major hospital on the island experienced damage, as well as an airport in the region. – Which island?
 * In one school, broken legs were reported when the building collapsed but no casualties occurred. – Comma after "collapsed".
 * One woman described locals as "panicked." – Insert "the" before "locals". Also, the full stop should be after the quotation mark.
 * Link "Bandar Abbas".
 * Disambiguation links: Ash-Shariqah, CRI and China Daily News.
 * No external links?
 * The lead is a bit short, could you add some stuff from the Relief efforts section?
 * And finally, the lead mentions Saddam Hussein, but he is not mentioned anywhere else in the article. Also, is there a reason to why he is included in the article?
 * Well, the earthquake occurred during his trial, but I'll remove that, since it's virtually unimportant. Ceran  →// forge 18:15, 31 January 2009 (UTC)

Nice job! I will now pass the article. — The Le ft orium  18:26, 31 January 2009 (UTC)