Talk:2006 Brickyard 400/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kpgjhpjm (talk · contribs) 13:13, 4 January 2019 (UTC)

Three weeks have now passed since the review has opened without any comments. Has any progress been made on the review outside of this site? MWright96 (talk) 15:14, 25 January 2019 (UTC)

Lead

 * before 280,000 spectators. --> before a crowd of 280,000 spectators
 * retook the lead from Kahne on the next lap. Burton led the most laps out of any one else (87) --> retook the lead from Kahne on the next lap and led the most laps out of any one else (87)

Background

 * No issues

Practice and qualifying

 * two on Friday and Saturday - Needs to be reworded.
 * damaged; he was transported - Replace the semicolon with and
 *  The crash meant Sorenson went into a back-up car - Needs to reworded

Race

 * when he hit wall avoiding Sadler --> when he hit the wall trying to avoid Sadler.
 * he rested --> he came to rest.
 * Kenny Wallace staggered his stop --> What is meant by that.
 * It means that the pit stop was arranged so that it did not occur at the same time as the others. MWright96 (talk) 09:18, 21 February 2019 (UTC)

Post-race

 * No issues

Comments
I made some Copyedits and the review is complete. Kpg jhp  jm  08:24, 21 February 2019 (UTC)
 * Thank you yet again for another review. All of the points raised above have been addressed and have made some other unrelated edits to improve the prose. MWright96 (talk) 09:18, 21 February 2019 (UTC)