Talk:2007 Coca-Cola 600/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 23:17, 13 January 2016 (UTC)

I'll have this one done soon! JAG UAR   23:17, 13 January 2016 (UTC)

Initial comments

 * "It was Mears' first and (as of 2016) the only win the Nextel Cup Series (today the Sprint Cup Series)" - might be better as It was Mears' first and (as of 2016) the only win of the Nextel Cup Series, now known as the Sprint Cup Series or something similar
 * Reworded
 * "Starting at the Coca-Cola 600, 1988 NASCAR Winston Cup Series champion Bill Elliott" - vague, are we still talking about the 2007 race?
 * Yes we are. This suggestion has been taken in.
 * "The third caution was prompted on the same lap when Tony Raines got loose and slid sideways" - what does this mean?
 * It means Raines lost control of his car.
 * "During the caution, All of the race leaders made pit stops" - lowercase
 * Done
 * "slowed on track, and spun at turn four while driving gingerly to pit road" - a tad informal. How about cautiously?
 * Done

Those were all of the (minor) prose issues I could bring up, but overall a comprehensive article. Once they're all clarified this can become a GA!  JAG  UAR   23:48, 13 January 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you for the review! I have made all of the suggested corrections, Z105space   (talk)  06:55, 14 January 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks! OK, this is good to go now.  JAG  UAR   14:27, 14 January 2016 (UTC)