Talk:2007 Dodge Dealers 400/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kpgjhpjm (talk · contribs) 01:33, 11 August 2018 (UTC)

Will review this one as well. Kpgj hpjm  01:33, 11 August 2018 (UTC)
 * Hamlin held the first position to Hamlin held the lead.
 * Remove the words for the lead
 * Kurt Busch led on which laps and Kenseth passed whom to take the lead ?
 * Change three practice session to three practice sessions
 * Change in the qualifier to in qualifying
 * Weird sentence - '''Kyle Busch was thirteenth, and recorded the nineteenth fastest lap.
 * What is meant by staggered his pit stop ?
 * Change in the center of turn two to in the middle of turn two
 * The Kyle Petty caution sentence could be reworded for better flow
 * In the lead it is mentioned Kenseth retook the lead on lap 98, but in the race section it is written lap 99 . Which one is correct ?
 * Kurt Busch had worn tyres, did Edwards make a pit stop or Busch did not pit ?
 * Earnhardt was passed by Biffle and Kurt Busch, so how can Biffle pass him 16 laps  later if he was already ahead.
 * Change McMurray's and Montoya made contact to McMurray and Montoya made contact
 * Change contacted Raines to made contact with Raines
 * Remove the words at the inside of the track

Comments
and you didn't fix the Earnhardt -Biffle issue above. When these are fixed, I will be promoting the article. Kpg jhp  jm  01:45, 12 August 2018 (UTC) Yes, promoting Kpg  jhp  jm  06:55, 12 August 2018 (UTC)
 * On-hold for now, once these issues are fixed, I will take a final look . Kpg  jhp  jm  16:03, 11 August 2018 (UTC)
 * Have taken action on all of the points raised above so far. MWright96 (talk) 18:16, 11 August 2018 (UTC)
 * There is one typo fort two stops to for two stops
 * Hopefully all of the issues have been dealt with. MWright96 (talk) 06:24, 12 August 2018 (UTC)