Talk:2007 Football League Championship play-off final/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Harrias (talk · contribs) 07:09, 1 July 2020 (UTC)

I'll take a look at this shortly. Harrias talk 07:09, 1 July 2020 (UTC)

Images

 * Are all appropriately licensed, and include alt text. (No work required).
 * Bonus balls. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!&#33;!&#33;) 08:40, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
 * I think the two of Poll and Pearson needs personality rights warnings.
 * Added. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!&#33;!&#33;) 08:40, 1 July 2020 (UTC)

Prose

 * "..with the first leg being.." Noun plus -ing.
 * Addressed. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!&#33;!&#33;) 08:43, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
 * "..made a number of saves.." "a number of" could be better replaced by "several".
 * Addressed. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!&#33;!&#33;) 08:43, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
 * "..with Albion progressing.." Noun plus -ing.
 * Addressed. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!&#33;!&#33;) 08:43, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
 * "top marksman" probably isn't encyclopaedic language, as nice as the variety is.
 * Suggestions please, without repetition. I'd take the risk on the language over repetition.  The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!&#33;!&#33;) 08:43, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
 * I've been learning from FAC; I'm all about giving problems with no solutions. If this is all that is left, then I'm not that fussed, though I would make more of a fuss at a potential future FAC. Harrias  talk 09:14, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Sure thing, we'll have a think then. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!&#33;!&#33;) 09:29, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
 * "..at the original Wembley Stadium.." No link to the old Wembley here?
 * Linked already. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!&#33;!&#33;) 08:52, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Not sure how I missed that. Harrias  talk 09:14, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
 * "Football League chairman Brian Mawhinney.." False title.
 * Addressed. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!&#33;!&#33;) 08:52, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
 * "..with Paul Peschisolido replacing.." Noun plus -ing.
 * Addressed. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!&#33;!&#33;) 08:52, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
 * "..to former Conservative Member of Parliament and Football League chairman Brian Mawhinney.." It is odd to introduce him for a second time, especially doing so slightly differently.
 * Addressed. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!&#33;!&#33;) 08:52, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
 * "..in front of a Wembley crowd of 74,993.." No need to repeat the attendance.
 * Addressed. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!&#33;!&#33;) 08:52, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
 * "..and within the first minute, Kamara's shot across goal was saved by Stephen Bywater.." A brief explanation of who the shot was for would held here; as Derby kicked off, I had assumed it was them, until I remembered that Bywater was their keeper.
 * Addressed. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!&#33;!&#33;) 08:52, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
 * It doesn't seem changed to me? Oh, I see now, you made a change in the second half section to clarify this, but I had meant the start of the first half. Harrias  talk 09:14, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Gah, addressed. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!&#33;!&#33;) 09:29, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
 * "..were ignored by the referee Webb." Poll presumably needed the toilet?
 * Addressed. Weird. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!&#33;!&#33;) 08:52, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
 * "..but struck he shot wide." Grammar.
 * Addressed. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!&#33;!&#33;) 08:52, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
 * "..whose strike grazes the woodwork." Fix the tense.
 * Keyboard. Addressed. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!&#33;!&#33;) 08:52, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
 * "..with Bywater making.." Noun plus -ing.
 * Addressed. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!&#33;!&#33;) 08:52, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
 * "..Barnes picked the ball up.." I wonder if this would confuse a layperson, who might think he literally picked the ball up with his hands? Maybe I'm not giving them enough credit..
 * Addressed. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!&#33;!&#33;) 08:52, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Can we provide a link or explanation for "square ball"?
 * Linked. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!&#33;!&#33;) 08:52, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
 * "..then Derby's Fagan was substituted by Marc Edworthy." Doesn't sound quite right to me, normally when we say someone was substituted by someone else, we mean by the manager.
 * For, not by. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!&#33;!&#33;) 08:52, 1 July 2020 (UTC)

That's it from me. Featured article candidates/2010 Twenty20 Cup Final/archive1 is feeling a bit lonely if you fancy having a look. Harrias talk 08:06, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
 * cheers, all done bar marksman, thanks. I'll add your FAC to my list even if it does make me a fanboy/groupie/etc etc.  The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!&#33;!&#33;) 08:52, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
 * updated. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!&#33;!&#33;) 09:29, 1 July 2020 (UTC)