Talk:2007 Heineken Cup final/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 14:38, 9 October 2021 (UTC)

I can take a look at this later today! —  Ghost River  14:38, 9 October 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lede

 * "and the first time" "as well as the first time"

Background

 * Should probably be specified that it was to "provide a new level of professional cross-border rugby competition"
 * "in their respective national leagues"
 * negotiations between English and French clubs who withdrew from the tournament because of governance flows better if this longer part is at the end
 * That part was removed prior to the publication of this full review MWright96 (talk) 16:56, 9 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Colon after "Tigers won both" for flow
 * Reworded differently MWright96 (talk) 16:56, 9 October 2021 (UTC)

Route to the final

 * Subheads should be "London Wasps" and "Leicester Tigers" for parallelism

Wasps

 * Delink Adams Park, linked above
 * Link whitewash
 * First sentence of the third paragraph has a lot going on, can probably be split into two
 * There are only two paragraphs in total in the London Wasps section MWright96 (talk) 16:56, 9 October 2021 (UTC)

Leicester Tigers

 * Delink Munster in the second sentence
 * Split the sentence beginning "They led Bourgoin" in half after "two conversions". Then the next sentence starts "Although Bourgoin scored 10 points", with a comma after "in the second half"
 * "and gain entry to the final"

Pre-match

 * Comma after "The referee for the match was Alan Lewis"
 * Delink "referee" per WP:OVERLINK
 * Comma after "Alain Rolland and Simon McDowell"
 * Comma after "The fourth official was Peter Fitzgibbon"
 * "A total of 56,000 tickets"
 * Delink Alex King, linked above

First half

 * Pipe "penalty kick" to Penalty (rugby)

Second half

 * Comma after "and passed the ball to Smith"

Details

 * Good

Post-match

 * "Tigers played worse than Wasps'" "Wasps outplayed Tigers"

General comments

 * All photos are properly licensed and are relevant to the article
 * No stability concerns in the revision history
 * Earwig score comes up yellow, but that's due to attributed direct quotes

All minor fixes; putting on hold for now, and ping me if there are any questions or when it's ready to be looked over again. —  Ghost River  16:16, 9 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Have made changes except where I have commented MWright96 (talk) 16:56, 9 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Made one more fix myself (I meant second paragraph where I said third, but rather than instituting another back and forth). Passing now. —  Ghost River  20:22, 9 October 2021 (UTC)