Talk:2007 UAW-Ford 500/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kpgjhpjm (talk · contribs) 04:23, 7 August 2018 (UTC)

Let us review this NASCAR article

Lead

 * Change as the new leader of restrictor plate wins to as the driver with the most restrictor plate wins with twelve
 * After the sentence Johnson was still leading as the final lap began add but and remove the full stop.

Background

 * Add space between Nextel Cup Series and and
 * Remove the word and between fifth and Kyle Busch.
 * Increased horsepower from 75 to 80 or increase by 75 to 80.

Practice and Qualifying

 * Change held the Friday before Sunday's race to held on Friday
 * The redlink to 2005 Pocono 500 is not required.
 * Change mandated to start 41st and 42nd to mandateed to start at the back . Kpgj  hpjm  15:25, 8 August 2018 (UTC)

Race

 * It is the first mention of McMurray, so change his name to full and link him.
 * Remove the words of cars.
 * Remove the words a narrow margin
 * Change .Hamlin took the lead to and he took the lead
 * Johnson was leading on lap 21, but Hamlin restarted in the lead on lap 22 - Did Johnson make a pit stop.
 * lost the first position to lost the lead
 * Weird sentence - Stewart moved past Sadler on the 133rd lap after receiving assistance from Stewart. This needs to be fixed.
 * Change Then Labonte to Then he
 * Petty's left or right rear blew . If there is no information write Petty's tire blew

Post-Race

 * No issues

Comments

 * On-Hold for now, when these issues are fixed , I will take a final look . The article is solid , though . Kpgj  hpjm  15:31, 9 August 2018 (UTC)
 * {reply|Kpgihplm}} Thanks for the review. Everything has been addressed apart from the McMurray query because he is already mentioned and linked in the practice and qualifying sub-section. MWright96 (talk) 18:12, 9 August 2018 (UTC)
 * Promoting, thanks for another solid article.  But please be more careful with your pings .  Kpgj  hpjm  03:01, 10 August 2018 (UTC)