Talk:2008 Brazilian Grand Prix/GA1

GA Review
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For the most part I was very impressed with this article. I just have one thing to point out:
 * "Rubens Barrichello was quicker than Honda team-mate Jenson Button in 15th. The Williams and Force India drivers qualified at the back of the grid, covering positions 16 to 20." This causes confusion to the reader; was Button 15th or in the bottom 5, since it seems to peg him as in neither? Tweak the sentences to reflect better.

Upon fixing this I'll call it a GA. Won't bother putting the on hold tag up, this should be fixed quickly. Wizardman 01:13, 16 December 2008 (UTC)


 * Got it. How's "Rubens Barrichello, in 15th, was quicker than Honda team-mate Jenson Button in 17th. The Williams and Force India drivers qualified at the back of the grid, covering positions 16 to 20 with Button."? Aptery  gial  05:35, 16 December 2008 (UTC)


 * Looks good to me now. I'll gladly pass the article. :) Wizardman  05:58, 16 December 2008 (UTC)


 * Cheers. I love reviewing an article that's gone through a PR! Thanks for the review. Aptery  gial  06:08, 16 December 2008 (UTC)