Talk:2008 Emirates Cup/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 12:07, 29 January 2018 (UTC)

Will take on this review. Expect comments to appear soon. MWright96 (talk) 12:07, 29 January 2018 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b ''([[WP:IMAGE RELEVANCE|appropriate
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b ''([[WP:IMAGE RELEVANCE|appropriate
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b ''([[WP:IMAGE RELEVANCE|appropriate

use]] with suitable captions)'':
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * You should add the city where the tournament was held not just the stadium.
 * "Held on the weekend of 2–3 August 2008, the participants" - participants of the tournament

Background

 * "Spanish champions Real Madrid" - champions of what?

Summary

 * Line up should be just a single word
 * Don't write Real Madrid as "Real".
 * "Van Nistelrooy almost scored inside three minutes" - inside of what half exactly?
 * "put the striker off by rushing towards him" - put the striker off is informal
 * "Real dominated and were punished for missing a host of chances" - missing multiple chances to extend their lead
 * "Receiving the ball from the left-hand corner" - left-hand corner of what exactly?
 * "the striker curled the ball past Dudek" - goalkeeper Dudek
 * "but Real sealed the win five minutes from time through Daniel Parejo." - How dd Parejo score?
 * Wikilink the word penalty to the appropriate article
 * "The striker was booed throughout the tournament as he failed to clarify his future" - failed to clarify his plans for the future
 * Wenger should have his first name spelt out and he should be wikilinked and mention he is the manager of Arsenal
 * ""Wenger confirmed Adebayor had agreed a contract extension, adding" - clarify that Adebayor agreed a contract expansion with the club
 * "Arsenal were beaten by- defeated

Standings

 * "Each team plays two matches," - should be in past tense

Articles looks good but am putting the review on hold until the necessary improvements have been made. MWright96 (talk) 13:40, 29 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks for taking a look at this believe I have addressed your concerns. Lemonade51 (talk) 16:12, 29 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Great. Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 17:25, 29 January 2018 (UTC)