Talk:2008 Spanish Grand Prix/GA1

GA Review
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Starting review.  SilkTork  *YES! 15:17, 15 May 2009 (UTC)

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Some good action shots of the race. Some great shots!

The picture of Aguri Suzuki is simply tagged on, and it's use in the article doesn't appear fully justified. At the same time, the information about this being Super Aguri's final race should be in the lead section. The lead section could be expanded a little more.

Article is stable.

Prose is clear and correct and appears to be neutral.

Lots of cites - not checked yet.

Looks to cover the main points. Promising.  SilkTork  *YES! 18:22, 15 May 2009 (UTC)


 * Thanks for your review so far. I expanded the lead to include Super Aguri and racism, and I changed the picture in the background section to something more relevant. Aptery  gial  01:11, 16 May 2009 (UTC)


 * This is a good and informative article with no serious issues. I am passing it. Some issues to think about - the phrase in the lead: "a serious crash" doesn't match the body: "Kovalainen's front left tyre suffered a rapid deflation, hurling his car into the barrier" - be good to tie them together more clearly. Also, the interchanging of car and driver can be hard to follow for the general reader - "Piquet, after running off the track on lap five, collided with Bourdais two laps later while attempting to pass at turn 10.[27] The Renault retired from the race immediately" - tricky, but a possible solution would be to put driver and car together: "Piquet's Renault retired from the race..."  SilkTork  *YES! 12:06, 16 May 2009 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review, points noted. Aptery  gial  13:08, 16 May 2009 (UTC)