Talk:2008 TNA World X Cup Tournament/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 02:37, 30 March 2016 (UTC)

Hello, I am Carbrera, and I'll be reviewing this article for possible good article submission.

Full review coming very soon. Carbrera (talk) 02:37, 30 March 2016 (UTC)


 * Alright, take your time. I'm expecting some issues since I nominated this so long ago.-- Will C  08:46, 30 March 2016 (UTC)

Paragraph 2

 * Omit "the" before "finals".
 * Done

Paragraph 3

 * Insert a comma before and after the phrase: "of the professional wrestling section of the Canadian Online Explorer".
 * Done
 * Insert a comma after "was a dream match for some".
 * Done

Paragraph 1

 * Insert a comma after "TNA Management Director".
 * I feel it disrupts the flow being that it is an official title.
 * Insert a comma after "TNA commentator".
 * Same as above.
 * Replace "were sending" with "was sending".
 * Done
 * Replace "TNA were" with "TNA was".
 * Done
 * Insert a comma after "British wrestler".
 * Same as first two
 * Insert a comma after "would be Team Mexico".
 * Done

Paragraph 2

 * Insert a comma after "Sabin pinned Doi".
 * Done
 * Replace "and lasted" with "which lasted".
 * Done

Paragraph 1

 * Insert a comma after "pre-existing".
 * Done

Paragraph 4

 * Insert a comma after "in the contest".
 * Done

Paragraph 6

 * Replace "round won" with "round one".
 * Done

Paragraph 11

 * The picture you used is here is kinda big, could you make it a tad bit smaller?
 * Shifted from 325px to 275px
 * Insert a comma after "Team TNA was the only team to not lose a member".
 * Done
 * Insert a comma after "Koslov at 15 minutes and 9 seconds".
 * Done

Paragraph 2

 * Replace "gave it less time" with "given it less time".
 * Done
 * Did you use the quote "Keller said the bout was a dream match for some with "lots of cool spots from start to finish" but that it had "little context early" and was more just a "bunch of spots"" before? Because if so, it may not be necessary to mention a second time. Same with "it had some spectacular (and ridiculously dangerous looking) spots,".
 * Used it in the lead, no where else.

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 * Insert a comma after "November 9".
 * Done

End of GA Review:
Not at all a bad article; I found very few issues with this article throughout. I shall put it on hold for seven days to allow you to make changes. Thank you. Carbrera (talk) 16:48, 3 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Alright, I'll get these done either today or tomorrow.-- Will C  17:16, 3 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Sorry this took longer than I said. I'm in college taking 21 hours this semester. Been alot of exams this week. I've solved all issues but 3 that I feel aren't big deals.-- Will C  09:10, 10 April 2016 (UTC)