Talk:2008 Turkish Grand Prix/GA1

GA Review
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Starting a review.  SilkTork  *YES! 15:24, 15 May 2009 (UTC)

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Images of the drivers are not from this race. Check out flickr to see if there are some shots of the race itself.
 * It has thus far generally been accepted to have images of the drivers out of their cars, not at the race itself. It was recomended to me by Apterygial to have images of the drivers, if no images of the race were available (and he did say that it was not right to use pictures of the cars at other races). The following articles all have images that are of drivers that were not taken at that particular race, and have all passed GA or FA: 2008 German Grand Prix (GA), 2008 Italian Grand Prix (GA), 2008 Japanese Grand Prix (FA) and the 2008 Brazilian Grand Prix (FA). All of these seemed to pass without any trouble on that point. I will check flickr to see if there are some pictures of the race though. Darth Newdar   (talk)  19:42, 15 May 2009 (UTC)
 * I have checked Flickr, and can see nothing which is free to upload to here. Darth Newdar   (talk)  19:51, 15 May 2009 (UTC)

Lead section going into too much detail of the race. Could include some background to the drivers and constructors championship, and certainly should mention the Super Aguri situation.
 * I have shortened the race detail a little. Darth Newdar   (talk)  20:00, 15 May 2009 (UTC)
 * I have now added the Super Aguri information. Darth Newdar   (talk)  11:55, 16 May 2009 (UTC)

Prose is clear, correct and appears neutral.

Stable.

Lots of cites (not checked yet).

Looks to deal with the main aspects.

Very promising.  SilkTork  *YES! 18:39, 15 May 2009 (UTC)

A little more detail on the race could be cut from the lead. It needs to be a brief summary. Check out the other Grand Prix Good Articles - 1997 European Grand Prix, 2007 Australian Grand Prix, 2007 Canadian Grand Prix, etc.
 * I have cut some more. Is that short enough now? Darth Newdar   (talk)  12:31, 18 May 2009 (UTC)

"exclusive two-way battle" - it's one or the other, not both. "exclusive battle" or "two-way battle".
 * Changed it to "two-way battle". Darth Newdar   (talk)  12:32, 18 May 2009 (UTC)

"controvesy [spelling] over whether this race was Barrichello's 257th" - is it possible to give a half-sentence explanation for the dispute. And was it a controversy or simply a discussion?  SilkTork  *YES! 07:33, 18 May 2009 (UTC)
 * I have edited it; see what you think. Darth Newdar   (talk)  13:02, 18 May 2009 (UTC)

I'm happy. This is a good, informative article. Well done.  SilkTork  *YES! 13:42, 18 May 2009 (UTC)