Talk:2009 Emirates Cup/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 19:01, 24 December 2017 (UTC)

Taking on the review of this article. MWright96 (talk) 19:01, 24 December 2017 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Summary

 * "and he nearly made goalkeeper Grégory Coupet pay" - might want to reword the last part of this piece of text slightly so it is more formal.
 * Wikilink Atlético Madrid the first time it's mentioned
 * "and ex-Arsenal player" - former
 * "when substitute Andrey Arshavin volleyed in from a cross" - Mention the player that executed the cross that allowed Arshavin to score
 * "Germán Pacheco equalised for Atlético from a counter" - I didn't understand what is meant by counter. That will need clarifying.
 * "defensive mistake" - this should be spelt as a defensive error

That is all from me. All references are in order. Going to put this review on hold. MWright96 (talk) 20:10, 24 December 2017 (UTC)
 * thanks for taking a look at this, got all corrections I believe. Lemonade51 (talk) 18:09, 26 December 2017 (UTC)
 * {{ping|Lemonade51} Good work. Now promoting to GA. MWright96 (talk) 19:01, 26 December 2017 (UTC)