Talk:2009 Football League One play-off final/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 08:41, 1 March 2021 (UTC)

Going to review this for the GAN March 2021 Backlog Drive. MWright96 (talk) 08:41, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * "The top two teams of the 2008–09 Football League One season, Leicester City and Peterborough United, gained automatic promotion to the Championship, while the teams placed from third to sixth place" - repetition of "teams"
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 18:17, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
 * "Scunthorpe's next season saw them finish in 20th place, two places above the relegation zone." - repetition of "place(s)"
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 18:17, 1 March 2021 (UTC)

Route to the final

 * "Millwall finished the regular 2008–09 season in fifth place in Football League One, the third tier of the English football league system, one place" - repetition of "place"
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 18:17, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
 * "Neil Harris scored in the 70th minute from a Gary Alexander to give Millwall a one-goal lead to take into the second leg." - there is a missing word from this piece of text
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 18:17, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
 * BBC Sport mentions a pitch invasion in the first leg of the second semi final. Is that notable enough to be added to the article?
 * Not really seeing that it had a major impact on the game itself. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 18:17, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
 * "The second leg, at Elland Road in Leeds," - can't find any mention of the match occurring at Elland Road by BBC Sport
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 18:17, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
 * "after Sam Sodje was pulled back in the area." - pulled back by whom?
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 18:17, 1 March 2021 (UTC)

Background

 * "where they lost 3–2 to Luton Town 3–2 after extra time." - repetition of the match's final score
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 18:17, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
 * "Scunthorpe had won both, with a 3–2 victory at home in October 2008 and a 2–1 win at the New Den." - which month did the 2-1 win at the New Den occur in?
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 18:17, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
 * "It was anticipated than around 45,000 Millwall supporters would attend the match," - anticipated by whom?
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 18:17, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Also, in the above sentence, I believe the word "than" is a spelling error, and thus should be spelt as "that"
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 18:17, 1 March 2021 (UTC)

Summary

 * Wikilink substitution to the relevant article on the first mention
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 18:17, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
 * "On 16 minutes, Sparrow was also booked." - what for?
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 18:17, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
 * "before Millwall's Tony Craig was shown a yellow card." - what was the yellow card for?
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 18:17, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Martyn Woolford is linked in this section when he is previously linked in the route to the final section
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 18:17, 1 March 2021 (UTC)

Post-match

 * "Scunthorpe's next season saw them finish in 20th place, two places above the relegation zone." - repetition of "places"
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 18:17, 1 March 2021 (UTC)

Am placing the review on hold to allow the nominator to address or query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 17:22, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
 * all done and/or responded to above. Many thanks for your review, both here and the other GANs you've done for me.  Cheers. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 18:17, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Now promoting to GA class MWright96 (talk) 18:48, 1 March 2021 (UTC)