Talk:2009 Giro d'Italia, Stage 12 to Stage 21/GA1

GA Review
The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.'' 1. Well-written?
 * For all prose in article, please list nationalities of all riders the first time they are mentioned.
 * In first sentence of second paragraph of lead section, please define queen stage for the average reader.
 * For all lengths, please include conversion of kilometer to mile, meter to foot, and kph to mph to non-metric users in the English Wikipeda.
 * For Stage 12, please spell out ITT.
 * For Stage 13, please spell out GC.
 * For Stage 16, please create article to Monte Petrano. On the first sentence of the first paragraph starting with "This stage has all kinds of climbing,...". Would "This stage had a variety of climbing,..." be better? On the second sentence of the second paragraph, who were the other cyclists besides Menchov that were "called back", why were they called back, and who called them back? On the last paragraph, convert 35oC to oF for non-metric readers of the English Wikipedia.
 * For Stage 17, on the second sentence of the first paragraph, define the "road conditions" that affected the route change.
 * For See also, please move the template after the references and remove the section completely.

2. Factually accurate and verifiable?
 * Pass - no issues.

3. Broad in coverage?
 * Pass - no issues.

4. Neutral?
 * Pass - no issues.

5. Stable?
 * Pass - no issues.

6. Images?
 * The tour map image at the start of the article looks fuzzy. Also, what do the red and green line signify on the map?
 * On the image in Stage 12, can you please spell out Armstrong's name and nationality in the image.
 * On Stage 19's image, can you please spell out the full names of Facci and Krivstov, their nationalities, and the location of the image during the breakaway.

7. Overall.


 * Good article. Needs work, but the article is there once it is fixed. Chris (talk) 19:07, 7 September 2009 (UTC)